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person dragonkitty
schedule February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
honestly i think that could be more than a one-shot(If that is what it is meant to be). I don't know why Ryou killed that person, or how he takes it after being raped.
It is well written,and i would just like to see more.
person Terry
schedule February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I actually want to see this fic continue! It was short, but has a plot. I hope you can continue with this story. Maybe Ryou and Bakura can get out of jail together. Hope you keep writing this!
person EgyptianGoddess
schedule February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hehe... I like this! poor Ryou! i think he did enjoy it though. You must update, i wanna see if Ryou and Bakura end up together. ^^ Oh by the way... who did he kill? and why?
person L
schedule February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
... Intresting. Maybe you shoudl do more. Cept, a bit more detail.
person crazieanimefan1
schedule February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AHH! THAT WOULD BE SO COOL!!! GO RYOU! YOU DA MAN! Keep updating by the way. This is getting good. Oh, I hope Bakura doesn't start cooking again *hint hint* ^_^
person Amy HiroZ¨
schedule February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
update update update!!!!!!!

(is that enough for you?)

@_@
person Darkwings
schedule February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is really really really good, but details could be added. Like who did Ryou kill and why? But otherwise, this is a great piece of work and a wonderful idea.