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for Tearing Pieces from the Dark

by JavaGreen

person Guppy
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Pleeeeaase, pleeeeeaaase you MUST write a sequel SOON !!
I just love your story!
person WitchesRayvyn
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow....it's so hard to find good fics now adays and I was so happy when I found yours. For only seeing two shows you did such a wonderful job. I wish you'd update but being an auther myself I know how hard it can be with a combination of work,life and writers block, to update let alone finish a fic. But if you DO update please let me know. *smiles* it was just getting good.
person L-bird
schedule August 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm thoroughly enjoying this story thus far. The character development is excellent, especially for someone that's seen so few episodes of the show (though I have found in the hands of a good writer a deep understanding of a show isn't necessary). My favorite pairing is Yami/Yugi, so this story had instant appeal for me, but I like how you handle the relationship and balance between them. I can easily see Yami being so protective of Yugi. Oh, and that well-hung conversation in the cages was too funny for words! I hope you post more soon.
person TopazKat
schedule June 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying this so far. The way that you have set up the plot is very intriguing and practically begs to have more written. Or rather, it makes the readers beg for more to be written: so that's what I'm doing. Please update soon.
person Sansi
schedule April 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was so cool. Hikari as a treasure - excellent!

And I loved the discussion between Yugi-Yami and Ryou-Bakura. It was cool!
person Sansi
schedule April 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yeah you have updated! Oh you have to updated this more often. It's awesome!!!!
person yaoigoddess
schedule April 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
no! why did you stop there? this was getting so good. please update as soon as you can. I hope Yami and Yugi will be ok, especially Yugi. I hope nothing happens to the other aibous and yami's either. Great story, update soon.
person soultaker
schedule March 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I REALLY like your story!(:
person Sansi
schedule March 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*hugs back* THANK YOU. I'm really honoured.

I'm just love the YamixYugi pairing so much! And angst turning into romance/fluff is my absolute favourite.
I know how much the ews ews mean to the autors. I wouldn't keep on writing without my lovely reviews. Even if I'm not as good as you.
You do a great job on this. I try to review every chapter from now an and you keep up the great work. Deal?! ^__^
*hands a Yugi and a Yami plushie*
person ShadowDove (too lazy to log in)
schedule February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey--

Great story. For not seeing very many episodes, you've done a nice job of capturing their personalities. I love Yami's protectiveness of Yugi...so kawaii! Can't wait to read more. Kep thp the awesome work and please update soon!


~*ShadowDove*~ ^__^