rate_review Reviews

This story is great! I'm very curious to find out what happens next! Please Write More Soon

Seto must DIE!!!! Update soon.

Aside from spelling/grammar stuff... I like it, are the children of Anzu, Shizuka, Honda, Dice boy, or any other character gunna show up? Also, for the record, is Yugi ther her with Anzu in this little world you've made?

P.S. Have Shizuka's kid(s) show up. OR ELSE... um... erm, TO THE SHADOW REALM WITH YOU!!!

i just wanted to say i think you are doing a very good job of your fanfic and i hope to see the next chapter up soon, so good luck on all of your other fanfics.


Starblaster

Meh...not as good as it could have been. Interesting idea, yeah, but the execution wasn't all that great. A good deal of errors. That being the main problem. Save that, maybe when you're done, you can go back for some fixing, cause it's somewhat good.

OMFG that was funny "sigh" this girl need to learn to spell though i mean what the fuck man, so many fucking spelling errors. you know what she needs hooked on phonics even though she is my cousin she needs to perfect her english cuz all i have to say is.................. nvm, best not say it, she'll probably try andl me or or somthin, but ne way the story is good so far so keep'em cummin and they better not be crap (p.s. make them learn eachother faster so they can fuck or sumthin)




sincerely, #1asshole

This is good you need to continue, yes. Good character details and scene descriptions. You planning on becoming a professional writer?