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for Dont Tell Dad I Love You

by LadyRedDarkness

person joker
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
your story is very good. i think you should up date ,add more chapters i would love to know what happens. keep up the good work!
person Mei Itemri
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice fic. ALthough I wish to point out the Jou's surename is NOT Katsuya. It is Jounouchi. In Japan the name is said surname then first name. So technically it is Katsuya Jounouchi, therefore Tabbyy would be Tabby Jounouchi. Other than that very, very nice.
person RoseFIC
schedule December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
come on you havent updated in months and this was really good please update
person Jessica
schedule October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow...all this build-up and you haven't updated or finished yet?!...oO...though I'm all for the yaoi, this is the first yuri I've read and have to say, it's good!...I like how you're taking it slow with them and also focusing on other POVs, not just the two girls'...I wonder, though, what was up with that dream and Seto..um..ya know...O.O...what was the purpose behind that?...good story! Hope you get the biting bug and write again! ^-^
person Renee
schedule May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Duuude!! That was good add more plzzzzzz!!!!! If you add more I'll do all your cores for a week :D. lol
person Hentai Kitti Kat
schedule February 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
so sad... WA!! *sniff* *hic* I ok now. please continue and Seto deserved the no sex thing lol
person mistryl
schedule December 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Love the story, even with all the grammar errors and thank god, Jonouchi never married Mai. But anyways, hope to see an update.
person TobiasX
schedule December 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant Story, but will you EVER Update it?
person TobiasX
schedule September 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story! :) Please update soon
person Elcede
schedule July 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow this is really great, and it has a great amount of detail to it...keep up the good work ^.^ 0-=D* (that ain't drool)