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Aww, it's so sad that it took me forever to find this story, it's even more sad that I've fallen in love with it and it's been almost 6 years since the last update!! (Yeah, I know you ended up either dropping or just plain forgetting about the story)
If it isn't too much trouble, and you have some time on your hands do you think you could write a bit more? Maybe hastily wrap it up or something if you don't want to continue it. I'm sorry, it's just that at least then I'll know it's over and done and completely a lost cause, if not already, to get anymore out of it.
Gomen Nasai, I'm very sorry to disturb you. Thank you for your time.

Please don't discontinue this story! Its so good and I really wish you would finish it. Are you just taking it off of here and putting it somewhere else, or are you trashing the story? :(

oh please please please continue i hope you work on this its really good

Cool I liked it and I was wondering if you would like to review anyone? anyone? for me get to chose a yaoi couple of your choice

That was great! Something new and good to enjoy.

Just a quick note to say, thank you for putting in that you had a co-author, though I would like to point out to anyone who cares that the co-author was originally not mentioned. I meant what I said, it is an interesting fic, which means I -had- read it, and that nice lil note about it not being, I believe, 'PLAGARISM' (sic) was not there. Anyway, thanks for adding it in, though are you sure your co-author has no problem with you revamping something that was a joint effort? Might want to take it up with her again.

The author DOES mention that she had a co-author, and from what I've heard, that's more credit than she deserves. She tends to make characters go COMPLETELY OOC, then wonder why the other person's char isn't responding to this the way she wants them to. And as much editing as this fic has unone,one, I doubt I'd even mention I had a co-author at all...she got removed in edit, too.

As for the fic itself, great job, Shini. ^_^ I can't even imagine how much work it was to go through and weed out the crap and actually fix everything. I just comment on stuff like that in MST form. Hmmm....

Interesting fic, I think, however that it would have been much more enjoyable for me had your co-author been mentioned, at the very least in passing. As it's been previously stated, it is -very- poor form to neglect that not-so-small detail. However, not only is it bad form, it's also a form of plagiarism. Any contribtution, however s, sh, should be noted and recognized by an author, or -smiles beatifically- it's illegal.

In order to avoid plagiarism, according to http://www.indiana.edu/~wts/wts/plagiarism.html, one must:

'give credit whenever you use

another person's idea, opinion, or theory;
any facts, statistics, graphs, drawings--any pieces of information--that are not common kedgeedge;
quotations of another person's actual spoken or written words; or
paraphrase of another person's spoken or written words.' --indiana.edu 'Plagiarism: What It is and How to Recognize and Avoid It'

Just so ya know. ^-^ (and I even gave an example! -gasp-)

This fic has been previously posted on yahoo message boards like A Dragon's Lair.

AWE! this fic is really cute and good. ^_^ it's a good perpective to...it's actually a relalistic oocness for Seto. it makes alot of sense to ^_^ -runs around- i hope to see more soon^_^
~Leaf~