rate_review Reviews

No rape scene. Not to Ryou! But I would suggest more comedy. This is a great story though.

I apologize for not reviewing chapter 1, although I meant to. It's always refreshing to see a Ryou+Bakura fic where Ryou's not being tortured and sodimized against his will, although there's def. a strange appeal there. Anyway, I enjoyed both chapters, you're talented, and it is nice to read a comedy/fluffy story while reading angsty/dark stories. Side pairings are always fun, because it makes chapters longer... and that's good when the chapters are as well put together as your first two. I suppose this is just my long winded way of saying, I think with the way your story has already gone to have Ryou suffer at this point would be too much. Let him have some fun, cause you're right... it's literally like every other Ryou/Bakura story the guys being attacked or something. hehehe.... Update soon. I'm enjoying this. ^_^

It was a good chapter; nice lemon. And yes youshould have side couples, who? Seto/Jou, why? Because I lOVE THEM! And rape, sure, why not? Dark, ooohhh I love that even more!
LATER...

Okay. I'll review.
YAY RYOU FOUND DA TICKETS!! THEY'RE GOING TA EGYPT!
I like egypt. And happiness between Ryou and 'Kura.
GIMMIE MORE!

I like the side pairings idea; probably the usual though. Yami/Yugi, Seto/Jou, you know. I know what you mean about the rape thing. It sorta brings bakura and ryou closer together. Newayz continue!!!!!!!!!!

Well, it's good, and I think it's just going to get better. I do hope you continu soon, I can't wait for the next chapter.
And the lemon was, damn hot!
LATER...

Great first chapter! Hopefully updates won't be too long, because that is one hell good of a Bakura/Ryou fic! Keep going!

Very hot! I like Bakura/Ryou in this fic. It's nice to see a fic where Bakura is beong nice to Ryou instead of abusing him. Keep it up! You'e good! ^_^

i love your story!! ryou and bakura are one of my FAVORITE pairings!! ^^v update soon, okay!! i love your writing by the way!!

More please : ) It was very well done, not to mention cute, sexy, and hot. Can't wait to see what else you come up with.