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March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! (Yes, uldaulda been one of the pervs gawking on the plane, LMAO-we bad-we rule!)
cant wait for the next chapter!
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cant wait for the next chapter!
:-)
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March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic! I cant wait for the next chapter!!!!!! Their vacation spot sounds very lovely, makes me wish I was there....of course it would be better if I could be there with Ryou and Bakura MUWHAHAHAHAH
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March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that chapter was so cute! I wish my boyfriend would take me to Egypt! T_T. write more!! ^_^ i love this fic! it's so cute!
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March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Kick ass story! I like it. Can't wait for the airplane scene. Your story is good and has the perfect amount of lemons. As for couplings, I would suggest Yami/Yugi, Seto/Jou, and Marik/Malik. Can't wait to seat'at's to come in later chapters. Great job!
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February 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
JK JK(just kidding about last review..i was mad)
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February 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
How old are these kids again?...their like what? 15...16...that really young to be having all of this sex...and how would you know what they do?*looks at darkly*...well anyway....to make this better i would put malik in it...well...a normal mali...not an all sexed up malik...u r probally thinking 'what the freaks wrong with maddy"...and you are right to do so*glare*.
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February 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Lgladglad he found those tickets. I like the idea of Malik/Marik (duh) a lot...but great job, nice lemon. I also like the idea of angst...but comedy is good too. Update soon!
~Bambi
~Bambi
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February 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE RYOU/BAKURA!!! YEAH! I love this fic, please hurry and update soon!
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February 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow....so hot! I love your fic so much! I don't wanna read Ryou getting raped. He's just so sweet and innocent.
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February 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
No! don't rape Ryou! pleeasse! he always gets picked on, one of the reasons why i love your story is because it isn't like that, and besides Ryou's too cute! ^_^ Yes you should definatly have side pairings! I would like to see Yami/Yugi and Marik/Malik, espically Marik/Malik, i don't see enough of those two, and they are so damn hot! ^__^ Hey maybe they could all be celebrating their anniversies too! And definatly humour, i'm getting sick of seeing all those dark, depressing fics out there at the moment, i want something funny. No offense to all the dark authors out there, there are some great dark authors/fics out there! ^_^ I'm just craving a comedy right now. Keep up the great work, this is a cool fic! ^__^
ps: What happened to your challenge? Is it over?
ps: What happened to your challenge? Is it over?