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for A Simple Lemon

by DirtyHentaiGoddess

person Hil
schedule August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, i'll admit when i first saw it i was slightly disturbed by the idea of Marik and Mokuba, but i must say (except for the suggestive insest stuff - not into it) the fic wouldnt have been quite so good without them *snickers*
Loved it.
Lmfao at EVERYONE being in Bakuras car. Thats just.. priceless.
Great work!
schedule December 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (Fangirl squeal!!)

OMG! OMG! OMG! OMG! OMG! OMG! OMG! OMG! OMG! I abso-bloomin-lutely loved this! WRITE MORE, PEEEESE?

Mokuba and Malik? YUMMY!
Bakura and Yami? PUUUUURRRRRRRR . . ..
Ryou and Yugi? HOT HOT HOT!

DAMN, does it hurt to be as good as you are?
person c0nfus3d
schedule March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
thats hilarious. everybody's fucking around in bakura's car, lol.
schedule February 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey,great lemons.I have always wanted to read Bakura/Yami,because i find them ammusing.With them always arguing and stuff.The Yugi/Ryou one was sweet,and i was shocked,because i have never saw them together as a couple.The hint of Mokuba and Marik was suspenceful...can i beg for you to do a sequel? =^-^=
person Shakirah
schedule February 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Marik + Mokuba... a pair I'd never think of.... but I think it works. I enjoyed reading this. ^_^
person Terry
schedule February 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WHOA! UMM.......Simple yet.....interesting. Marik and Mobuka? That's an interesting pairing, you should continue this fic.

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