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by darkvixen

person Pwetty Blood
schedule February 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
(Happy dance) Yay! Foursome lemon! So Marik's posing as Malik now... That is funny. It's just so hard to imagine him as a slave! Submissive and Marik just don't go... Hope he doesn't screw up. ^_~
person Hiei449
schedule February 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
awsome story!!! please continue!! poor bakura and malick!! poor ryou and marick!!
person crazieanimefan1
schedule February 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The ol' switch-a-roo! Thank Ra they look almost identical and everything! Great update. Oh, uh, I don't think you should've insulted Bakura's cooking, but the fact he's walking around *ahem* NAKED is something I WOULD LOVE TO SEE!!! Oh hell. Don't you hate it when you have such jealousy in the room? I think Malik saw this review. I'm an up and coming Bakura fan, but I'm an all about Malik fan. Keep updating! Loved IT!
person crazieanimefan1
schedule February 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Bakura's holding you hostage to say his cooking is good?! I'd like to see him try that with me! Marik's unsheaving the Millennium Rod as we speak. *He's very protective of little ol' me*. Anyway, great update and I wonder which two they caught Bakura and Marik or Malik and Ryou. Keep updating and thanx! And tell Bakura his cooking sucks! He sent some to me and I had to toss it to the dogs! GREAT JOB!
person Pwetty Blood
schedule February 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
(In a fit of giggles) Anzu got hit by lightning!! LOL!! I'm surprised the alligator was able to stomach her though... Poor, unsuspecting Yami, evil Seth wishes to over-take his kingdom. I really don't care which of them wins since they're both somewhat of a tyrant... But I feel so sorry for Joey!! I wonder what will happen... Keep writing!
person dragonkitty
schedule February 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think this story is very cute, and i can't harly wait till there is more to read.
person Pwetty Blood
schedule February 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
(Huggles Baku Plushie) Yay! Thankies!!! ^_____^ But that doesn't mean I forgive you for leaving it at a cliffhanger just when it was getting so good! Malik is always was my favorite uke... And Ryou makes an interesting seme. It's challenging to fit dominance into his personality. That's what makes it so worth reading though. Delicious lemon so far!
person Pwetty Blood
schedule February 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Poor Yugi! At least we know that Yami really does have a heart... Then again, he was just thinking about punishing his own slaves before the incident. Hmm... He's a tad hypocritical then, no? ^_^
person Pwetty Blood
schedule February 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Something about Kura and Marik kidnapping their two Hikaris naked strikes me as pr dam damned funny, not to mention the whole hitting the Pharaoh with a vase incident! Delicious lemon in Chp 2 and will you be doing a Yami/ri lri lemon soon? I love those pairings! Especially Malik/Marik... Yummy.
person Terry
schedule February 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story! Hope you update today! Can't wait to see a peeved Yami :)

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