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Hmm it would be interesting to do this as a Yugi or Yami POV to see who sees what and all.

woooooohooo! that was great! ~Leaf~

A very interesting fic! Genuine humor shone through it several places. All the more remarkable, it wasn't forced. I really like your treatment of Yuugi and Yami. You acknowledged that both there and didn't take any plot short cuts to dump them in separate bodies. There weren't any glaring spelling or grammer mechanic mistakes and the plot was rather cute. The lemon was quite pleasent to read. Shizuka's character was interesting as well; she might not be as innocent as people would believe!

All in all, a very nice job. I can't wait to read more of your work, expecially if it's Yuugi/Jounouchi!