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for The Fruit of Temptation

by ShadowSpecter17

person Mandy D.
schedule February 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Pleaze continue!! Can't wait until Yugi comes in!!!!!!!!!
person ReikoKitten1990
schedule February 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
so far the story sounds good it was a little short but I cant wait to read more
person Red Dragon of Egypt
schedule February 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
RD:hoy i feel for ya Yami i can understand how u would hate a prearranged marriage without your consent or liking im just hoping this turns out a little better cuz i mean sure anzu is cute shes funny shes pretty(im lying)hehe sry i just had to put that part in i saw it one time on sister sister were one of the twins cant remember her name says to this boy they know that hes good looking hes funny then wispers to her sister im lying hahaha funny as can be well keep up the superb work shadow and thank you for choosing this fic for i love your work and i woudnt like it to much if u actually made a fic that i wouldnt like and the joe joey abusing yugi would soo be one well gtg TTFN TA TA FOR NOW oh and pls shadow tell me if u mind or not if i use that line tigger uses when he is saying good bye to his friends ive been asking so i would like to know thnk u ^____^