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for Black Rose

by YamiRynEnjeru

schedule June 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved how you played on the words to work in Mariks poem for his light. Excellent usage of the vernacular. The Lemon was hot as well. LOL

Seriously, I like your writing style.
person Homnunculus
schedule May 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is such a pretty story with a nice sadistic twist. I love how it id written and I love this pairring. The way spoke to eachother was so beautiful. Great job. Write more fanfiction. Your good.
person Sexykitty404
schedule March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey! I just read tand and it's awsome!!! I LUV Marik/Malik stories. And the rose ended it perfectly!!
If you find the tiem can you write more? Thanx!!
^_______^
Sexykitty404
person Sexykitty404
schedule March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I LUV ur story!! You've got a great knack for writing!! Keep it up!!!
Thanx! ^________________^
Sexykitty404
person Ryoanna
schedule February 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm.. Sorry about the email. I don't know what's wrong with my damn computer. Hmmm... I'll try to see what's wrong and if you can, try to email me in a couple of days and see what happens.
Thankies!!!
Ryoanna ^_^
person Ryoanna
schedule February 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YUM!!!! I LOVE Malik/Marik fics. You really good at writing with much detail!!
If you can find the time, could you write more? This is probably the best M/M story I've read! Maybe make another chapt. about their daily life or something.
Weel anyway, GREAT CHAPTER!!
PLEASE WRITE MORE!!
Thankies,
Ryoanna ^_^
person Hiei449
schedule February 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was good! that was really good!
person Anvanimaserke
schedule February 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was so NOT dumd, it was cool!! wow, its been a long while sece i have seen a fic with Marik actually that insane, it was cool!! very good job!
person Sailor Anime 72286
schedule February 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*claps* Lovely!! Absolutely wonderful! Resplendent!

Hiei: Resplendent? Hn. Baka ningen...
Me: Quiet, Hiei-chan! Anyway, Great work, YE-san!
person PrincessLemon
schedule February 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
...*simply breath taken*...