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for Bakura and Ryou

by fistfgt

person Scorpio
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What in the f*uck is this? OMG how disrespectful of the gay and lesbian community. At some point, in some place every group of people has been discriminated against, and mistreated. I find it bizarre that you would even post such disgusting crap on in a fandom that's 90 percent Yaoi. If your intention was not to hate against them you did a lousy job. And if you truly have nothing against gays you would delete this sh*t and not write anything like it again. It's sad that you have nothing better to do with your time. In the five minutes it took you to type this bullsh*t you could have done about 50 other things. It's a shame there is nothing else you have to do, maybe you should try a hobby. Stamp collecting or something.
person fistfgt
schedule February 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
How have I wastedr tir time if you were the one that clicked the link despite the PWP tag? It's one thing if you were specifically looking for an idiotic story and were disappointed because mine didn't suck enough, but the majority of the reviews act like it's MY fault that they wasted thirty seconds reading my stupid fic. >_>
person Meepa
schedule February 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I, personally, laughed my ass off, though it was really stupid. But that was the point, ne? I get you're trying to be funny, but it did sound a LITTLE like you were bashing gays/gay-fics. But, now that I know you're not, I liked it(A little more than before. ^^)! It made me laugh....
But Ryou's still dead. -.-;
I lurv him.
He's my uber-uke boy-slut.
One tip though; You should probably space what different people are saying into a seperate paragraph, because it gets confusing on who's talking.
Thanks for the laugh.

~Cecilia
person Anon
schedule February 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is dumb, stupid, and pointless. You've only wasted my time.
person Kokoru
schedule February 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG! That was so funny! XD Although, was your intention humor? I don't care, that was great anyway. ^^;;;
person Bambi
schedule February 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I agree with Sin...making fun of gays/bi? Love it love. Then you shouldn't be in the YAOI (ahem, hence YAOI) section of Yugioh. And...I don't think many people have 3 foot dicks either, correct? It was a good laugh though.

~Bambi
person D-chan
schedule February 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have read parodied yaoi fics before that have been really good. I have also read a few necrophilia scenes that were quite well-written. This paragraph, however, is not one of them. Yeah, some people take the PWP concept to ridiculous extremes [ie, two characters who should absolutely detest each other or have no relationship whatsoever (Honda and Pegasus, Katsuya and Insector Haga) have cute fluffy sex for no apparent reason], but this.... It's just not funny, and it really does not get the point across that the author is satiring yaoi PWPs. It's just one of those things that you look at and just go: Oo?? oO??? WTF?????
person Sin
schedule February 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well that was fucking retarded. Sounds to me you're making fun of gays. I happen to be a bi male. What a waste of space!!! The site has enough crap on, it doesn't need more. If you’re trying to be humors you failed miserably
person princessoflightanddarkness
schedule February 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I agree with both Sin and Acid
You need to watch what you do
I Love is love no matter race sex or religion
You have to understand that this is goinfendfend people
INCULDING ME
that is just plan sick get a life for no matter what nobody is going to change who they are so just DEAL WITH IT
person fisftfgt
schedule February 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You're all fucking idiots. :) I have nothing against gays, and this fic was not written to make fun of them. It's mocking the excessive idiocy of so many yaoi fics.