rate_review Reviews

well, what can I say..... it was short....proper grammer.....although the language was a little crude. Okay I cant lie you are so gonna get fucked in the ass for this one. HAHAHAHAHA pretty stupid if I say so. Funny though.

o_O That was...uh..weird kin kind of sick and disturbing way. You have a REALLY warped sense of humour, you know that? I have a question for you, if you are so sick of reading bad fics (i can relate to that!) then why read them? I realize that you were making mockery out of bad fics, but you still gotta be careful or you'll end up offending a lot of people. I think you have some serious issues you need to work through. Egy

LOL!!! That was very funny and very disturbing at the same time. o_O i didnt know that was possible. *Not to self: things funny and disturbing are possible.*

That... was beautiful. :B

what was that?!?!?! O_O
man, talk about random...
ryou's dead, oops indeed...
i'm not sure if i should say 'great fic' coz this one doesn't really have much class.
funny nontheless and i must admit i laffed quite a bit.

That's really mean of you to do that to Ryou
and if Naru see this she going to go crazy
of what you did to Ryou.
poor Ryou

OMG thisie moe most retarted shit I have ever read.
U need serious mental help and I anit joking.

OMG, this is so not meant to be discriminatory. I mean, sure, it's vulgar, but it's meant to be. I mean, the length of the story, if anything should've told you that. I totally enjoyed this story, and I agree with fistfgt on the pointless sex thing. It's just that--pointless. However, people seem to enjoy it and that's why it's in abundance on the 'net. But I'm sure people also enjoy stories such as this one, so it's rather rude to say that this story is not worth it and that everyone loves PWPs and fluff and shit like that. Not everyone likes what you like, and the same goes for what you DON'T like. Don't discriminate yourselves, it's disgusting to blame others of disinatination when that'sctlyctly what you're doing.

Peace, Kokoru.

I read this particular selection after Kokoru's suggestion that I do A t A three-foot wang? I laughed so hard that if I had been drinking milk it would've come spraying out of my nose in a glorious fountain. How could you not tell that this was supposed to be humor? Who would think that if you were trying to make a serious fanfiction, especially a bashing one, that you would give someone a three-foot wang. It's your own fault for reading this, fistfgt didn't exactly force your eyes open with duct tape while holding a gun to your head. If anything it's your own damn fault for the damaged incured.

that so sucked and I agree with everyone else it dose make fun of gays and to tell you some of my friends are gay so dont write fic like that again kay