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Dear Mr.fistfgt, unless you write or at least try to write something half decent, I suggest you stop wasting space on this site with your pointless and stupid stories.

That was an insult to the art of writing. If you aren't going to try and produce worthwhile work, don't waste your time.

hehe, that was fun... NOT. Anyways, you (people who reviewed) are all just a bunch of dickheads for taking this crap seriously. It's not that it didn't suck,auseause it did, bigtime, but still... lighten up fuckers. You're all just going to hell anyways for liking stories with sexual content. homo or hetero or bi or omnisexual, sex is still sex and it's sinful. Poor mortals.
Why am I reading stories with sexual content? Well, because I am God, therefore I can not go to hell. Go and eat your own shit. Am I supposed to be nice and forgiving?, well NO, I am a sick bastard who enjoys watching my creations suffer in the darkest pits of hell.

Die soon, fuckers.

This "fic" is CRAP!!RUBBISH!SHIT! If u can't be bothered to write properly, then don't bother putting anything on this site at all!!

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA you are so going to hell, and when you get there you're gonna get fucked up the ass by a 3 foot wang HAHAHAHA 3 foot wang funny really funny8} but like i said you're going to hell, see ya later homophobic freak.

I usually don't review but it's been a couple of days and i just had to come back and review, I never laughed my ass of this much before, i hope you don't get flamed too bad for this i mean it is a little crude but that's what makes it funny, but god getting off when someone's dying that's what makes me laugh harder, great story

I FELL OFF MY CHAIR LAUGHING!!! I KNOW YOU DID'T MEAN IT AS SULTSULT!!! p.s if you see Lady Luck kill him for eating my Donut! GOOD FANFIC *laughs harder* I do sort agree with Sphinx and Kai you should write anouther Fanfic Bye!

Yo me and Sphinx Read your Fanfic. Like I thought you got A lot of Flames. Don't worry I sorta get the Joke. Sphinx had to read it Twice
(Don't worry again it's not your Fanfic!!! Sphinx has 1 brian cell!!) * Gets hits by Sphinx* Oi! Any way I sorta argee with Sphinx? You should White Anouther With the same Polt but a different Ending you know? I know you did't mean as a insult to anyone. Good luck

SORRY!!!!!Sorry about my earlist Enterey ,but some how my Older brother got on my computer ( SORRY) I would never write anything like that!! Any way he's dead now for whiting it Hope you forgive me please? But i think the Polt line was good about Bakura finding out Ryou is gay and he help Ryou get though it maybe you should write a anouther one with the same Base line but instead of Ryou getting Killed, He and Bakura could be Lovers ( Fluff instead of comedy)? Hm?? Anyway I don't have an E-mail ( Sorry) So could you write what you think of my Idea is a review Please? And SORRY again for my brother! I have read it and did't realise untill I saw the Reviews that he whote it, at frist I did't get, But my Friend Kai Bay ( You might see him around Reviews) Pointed out the punch Line. Still SORRY!!