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for Umi no kaze-Seabreeze

by Fel5

person FYI
schedule April 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's MAKO no MARKO
person chikky
schedule December 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay so now I have read every single one of your stories up to date. I love how you can contrast between them all between Seto/Jou and Mako/Jou. Or and to tell you it's Mako not Marko... okay? Love your writing please don't ever stop.
person Dirty D
schedule February 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*glares* That was short and evil. I sure hope you don't tease me again like that or I'll give you a lit candle!
Random Person: -_- Can you lose brain cells by drinking Pepsi? Because I think it's the cause of her stupidity...
person Santurion
schedule February 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nooooo!!! This is soo mean! (Cliffy) >_< But I'm not complaining, nuh-uh, I'm not. *sigh* Please, continue soon!
person Pyro Mistress
schedule February 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You ask for a flame and I'm going to GIVE IT TO YOU!!! *hands authoress' a torch* Okay now for the review. XD MakoxJoey what a pairing! *drool* And what a nice lemon...
Random Person: Hey, she said flame as in reviews that speak badly of the story! Not a freakin' torch!
Momma Cat: Really? I thought it was strange to ask for a torch, but I figured her stove pilot light was out or something...
Random Person: -_-;
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Finally, some action!!! Hehe, someone is a little bit frustrated, ne? ^ ^’ Anyway, I really liked it, and thank you for updating so soon!
person Santurion
schedule February 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, since I see that pairing (dare I call them so?) first time, I really appriciate it, if you continue. Please?

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