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for Giving In

by DracOnyx

person darkpharaoh04
schedule February 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chapters! To be honest this time a really felt sorry for Tea, I mean, I would most of the times laugh at her disgraces, but now I really want her to end well. You are so right about the Malik and Karik thing, this has to be possible to Yami to, so he can defeat his evilest side too. Give us a happy ending please.
person YamiNShadowsGirl
schedule February 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow great fic i absolutely love it poor Yami and Yugi that dark Yami is one evil guy i love it (more Yami torture i love Yami torture) v cool story update soon im dyin to see more (I love Yami)
person ACIDFLOWER
schedule February 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
0_0 You're really good at this stuff ^^ I hope you had a good v-DAy. Mine was ok, I didn't get to see my man because he had to work, he works about threes hours were i live. But I get to see him this week. And soon he's coming back to Toronto, that's the city I live in. ^^ Listen to me going on and on in here....but they give you so much room. Well keep it up girl! My friend by the way thinks you're very gifted. I agree you are! For someone who doesn't dp dark you do one HELL! of a job ^^


Thank care
ACID
person MissMatch
schedule February 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hope you update soon, though also hope the ending isn't (too) angsty!'ve've seee dae darkness, and a happy (well, not angsty) ending would balance it. Please? :(

(Your writing is v. good, btw. Sorry, forgot to mention that in my concern for Yami&Yugi...)
person ACIDFLOWER
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG sniff Damn....I don't know what to say. You're really gifted. God it's a houor you like my stuff. ^_^ Happy v-day to!
person DarkQueen
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Just Great! Awesome!!!
LATER...
person dharaharaoh04
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was great, kind of sad but good. That's why I love Yami so much, he's willing to give up his own existence for the ones he cares about. He's my idol!!! That's the Yami everyone knows, brave, proud, nice, and of course so sexy. Update soon please.
person darkpharaoh04
schedule February 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow! this can't be good! I'm not saying that this story sucks 'cause it rocks, but I really hope this have a happy ending, I hope that the Yami we all know comes back and finishes with the dark Yami. C'mon! The pharaoh has to win this battle, for something he's called the King of Games. PLEASE! WRITE A HAPPY ENDING!!!! and update soon.
person ACIDFLOWER
schedule February 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG DAMN YOU"RE GOOD!!!! WOW THANK YOU AGAIN SO MUCH FOR THIS!!!! I'LL UPDATE YOURS I HOPE TONIGHT MOR TOMOR!!

LATERS

I LOVE IT!
person DarkQueen
schedule February 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Of course we LOVE it! But really, I can't get enough of it. And it just keeps getting better and better!!!
LATER...