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for Giving In

by DracOnyx

person Sansi
schedule February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG I can't wait to read the sequel. That was so awfully sad ... *sniff*
Thank you for telling me, that you have updated
person Shadow
schedule February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YOUR DEAD!!!! lol just kidding ne way great story! who would have though the darkness of a dars wes well ne way cant wait till your next story!
person ACIDFLOWER
schedule February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
00 WOW! I LOVED IT *hugs* Man you did a kick ass job! See why you're one fo the best on Aff to me ^_~
Keep up all the fics
person Moztartz_Ballad
schedule February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am sorry I haven't reviewed in awhile. O.O I had 3 reports all due on the same day *falls over tired.*
o.O() god!!! I have tears in my eyes reading the last chapter!! That was soooo sad about Yami being gone.
You did really well in thought of how Yugi would be like if Yami is gone from me that he would feel empty.
You captured his character really nicely.
Now I'm wondering what the le fle for this fic is going be like.
I can't wait to read it soon.
Great job on this dark fic!!! ^_^ Congrads!!

Moztartz_Ballad
person Shakster
schedule February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sigh............. It's.... it's beautifully sad.... beautifully written, from beginning to end.... I'm.... I don't know what I am... sometimes the best love stories are the ones that end and tears.... I just, amazed, what wonderful story telling.... You captured Yugi's soul in a way I've never seen before. I can't be mad... some of the best stories are tragedies.... Well, now I wait untie see sequel.... I'm still stunned, but sated. Simply wonderful.
person YamiNShadowsGirl
schedule February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*sniff* *sniff* man that was so sad *sniff* U_U i miss him poor Yugi i hope he will be alright well at least your doing a sequel so its not so bad besides if we killed you we wouldnt see a sequel well cant waiur gur great at this i also think your very good at capturing the characters emotions i really did feel sorry for Yugi you described his sadness so well what can i say your talented i love your work keep it up cant wait to see more of it ^_^
person Sansi
schedule February 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*crying* That's so sad. Yami can't die. I definitely hope this will work out in the next fic!

See ya!
person Shadow
schedule February 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
NNNNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO NOT YAMI! great story but one question is it finished and if not will yami come back well the good one ne way!
person ACIDFLOWER
schedule February 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
HOLY SHIT! I loved every word of this wonderful fic! I'm redoing yours you like love stoires I recall ^^
But anyways WOW! I wish i could write this good! I lvoe your work keep it up hon!
person MissMatch
schedule February 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh no! Will Yami come back in the sequel? I mean, the pieces of the puzzle could be swallowed by the fishes now, kinda complicating things. I just wanted to know if Yami's story is done and seq sequel will be about everyone's recovery. *hopes Yami comes back* (yeah, hope springs eternal) Poor Yugi...

I'm impressed you can write so much (this & so many chapters of Gravitation too) good job!