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by DracOnyx

person Erika
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm thinking of it(Not)
person zombiedarkelf18
schedule February 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
god that was so good i cried so much at the end poor yugi/ yami
person ladywolf_Terri
schedule February 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn!!... You almost mad me cry you evil woman!!..*snuggles*..it was a great story though aff did munch some places but it was still so great!! Going to read the sequel next!!
person Naye025 (I\'ll sign in one day)
schedule November 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey,
I LOVE your fic. It's so eerie!! I love the way that Yami's darker half...(whoever thought dark could be darker?) was psychotic and how he tortured everyone. I enjoyed the flow of the story and if I could rank it, it'll be 10/10.

Ja!
person jaded dragon
schedule July 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
nnooo!!!! yami!!! T.T.. even though what happened to yami and yugi..it was still a kick ass fick.. (parden my french ^^) dark yam soo soo evil *drools*..and the bictch face (there i go again!!^^;)tea got what she deserved!!! *kills tea* die you whore!!! ^^; sry.. any who... i can't wait for the sequal so i can find out what happenes.. and umm.. could you email me when tew cew chappies are posted???? my email is jadeddragon1024@hotmail.com.. many thanks!!! *glomps dark yami and procedes with the tea killing...*oh ..and umm.. write on!!^^
person Silvershadowfire
schedule June 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*Busily tying up Yami SSF in a corner*
Hi there. I just finished this story, and I must say it was very dark, very different, and as I've come to expect from you, well written.
Yami SSF: But there had BETTER be a sequel! Or else!
Damn...forgot the gag. *gags Yami SSF*
Sorry about that. She's a little worked up. I'm afraid she wants to do something vaguely unsantsant to Yami's dark side - which we dubbed 'Kage' if you ever want to use it, it means 'Shadow' in Japanese - and is almost foaming at the mouth wanting a sequel.
Yami SSF: Mhff Gffr.
So please, post quickly! *Big smile*. Oh, and as to your offer, I would love it if you would e-mail us at the above address when you post.
Thank you!
person Arainaina
schedule March 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This was good
person Rurouni_agra
schedule March 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Kill you? I want to hug you!
That was so good, I want to cry. *single tear falls*
Another brilliant work and a tear jerker.
Thank Ra for sequels. I'm gonna go read it now.
Ja
person DarkQueen
schedule February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
To me it was a great ending! But I look forward to the sequel.
LATER...
person Tauqeer
schedule February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful story, except for the fact that you basically left us with no hope of Yami and Yugi ever being reunited again, not even death can allow them to join with each other again, which i have to admit is very diappointing. The ending was heart-rending though. Great job!!! Do you think you could do a sequel where somehow Yami is able to finally die and visits a grown Yugi, a Yugi who has had lots of boyfriends, experienced life the way Yami wanted him to. Yami could meet with him in his dreams, give him comfort, and keep on meeting with him this way, until they finally rejoin after Yugi's death. It's just a suggestion. And you could even extend the story into a portrayal of their afterlife.