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for Contracting Mr. Devlin

by prittymaliksgirl

schedule December 8, 2018 at 12:00 AM

this was awesome, will there be a sequel of sorts?

schedule December 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Aishiteru! This was such a good story, I love how you had a new pet name every line, that is SOOOOOO Pegasus. Seriously, the characterization was very well done, and I was truly impressed! I really feel bad that there aren't more chapters to this, as this actually is a relationship I can see going at least as a three-shot. But I'm not working under your muse, now am I? The only criticism I would have, if any, is that it moves really fast, and there wasn't enough of it! ^.~

I really enjoyed reading this, and I hope you publish a lot more!
person Becky
schedule March 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Umm... A little unique, but okay. Yeah, it was alright.

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