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January 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It was stil really good! Bring lots and lots of paper to write!!!
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January 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well it's okay for a PWP, but did you proof read this? Lots of errors and what cheesy dialog.
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January 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It was extremely rushed, and the dialouge could use some help. But I like Honda/Otogi (Tristan/Duke, whatever) action so it wasn't all bad.
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January 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Dats not mer e-mail....Kurai_dragonblade@yahoo.com is. But...HOLY FUCK! That wot! ot! I like this es!!es!! *hentai giggle*