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by DracOnyx

schedule March 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AHHH!! Evil Malik!!!!!! Well I hope they kill him this time! I can't wait till the next chapter!!!!!
person Arainaina
schedule March 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aw very good please write more soon I want to see what happens
person The Pop Tart Spirits
schedule March 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I hate you, I love you, I hate you... I love you.

This is the best story of this type I've ever read, as I most likely told you before... however they all three need to come out alive after castrating and killing both Pegasus and Malik, and then the threesome needs to have a lemon that spans three chapte
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The disgrace needs to end...

^_^ However you are the authoress and I trust your judgement.
person Rurouni_agra
schedule March 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
As evil as this is, I LOVED this chapter. Like I said, you're easily one of the best authors. Please update soon.
person Leaf zelindor
schedule March 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
-squeals and falls over- eeeeeeee i'm sorry that you've had so many pros...s...my car died a few months back so i understand how that goes anyway. but OMG!!!! -falls over-
Wing: she's okay really...she really liked the chap, read it really eagerly..she's just freaked out and wants to kill people now. not you though.
^-^
~Leaf~
person Kschur32
schedule March 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another good chapter. I am so glad that they have coe to get yami but I hope they have not gotten themselves re caught. Waiting for the next chapter.
person LadyGrey
schedule March 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
S'okay on the delayed update, we forgive you! Awesome chapter 20 (and better with the anticipation!) -- all I could think when Marik was talking to Yami was "Don't tell him it's Bakura, you'll break his mind!" Can't wait for more!

LadyGrey
person Jenna Casey
schedule March 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon..... They got caught..... 0_0 That's awful!!
person YamiNShadowsGiirl
schedule March 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
once again you amaze me with another great chapter this is probably one of my favorite chapters so far i love Yami torture you might thnk im evil but well i cant help it i am looking forward to the next chapter too i check every day to see if you have updated this is one of my most favoriite stories keep up the excellent job ^_^
person Yu-Gi-Oh_lover_08
schedule March 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG!!!!!!!! I can't believe this!! Why would you do that to Bakura and Marik?! Why would you do that to Yami?! Well it looks like Malik got what he wanted. He has Yami as a toy now. Malik defenitly is a psycopathic son of a bitch. I hate cliffies! I love the story thought. Lots of action and suspense and lots of twists and turns. How does Pegasas fit into all of this? I love this story it is one of my favoties righw. w. See you later. Bye