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Awesome! This was a great chapter!!

OMGOMGOMG!!!! That has got to be one of the sadest chapters of this story. I hope that Yami comes out of what ever he is in. Malik diserved to die for what he did to all of Yami's friends. Well can't wait for the next chapter. I ABSOLUTLY LOVE THIS STORY!!!

OMGOMGOMG!!!! That has got to be one of the sadest chapters of this story. I hope that Yami comes out of what ever he is in. Malik diserved to die for what he did to all of Yami's friends. Well can't wait for the next chapter. I ABSOLUTLY LOVE THIS STORY!!!

Malik does need to rot in hell damnit, I hated him so much!! Gods I wanted to kill him myself!! I hate how he did that to Yami because that should never happen, ever! Yami is so cool! Anyway, keep it up mate, you rock. I can't wait to see more of this story, I love it so much!
Cheers, Meg

OMGOMGOMG!!!! That has got to be one of the sadest chapters of this story. I hope that Yami comes out of what ever he is in. Malik diserved to die for what he did to all of Yami's friends. Well can't wait for the next chapter. I ABSOLUTLY LOVE THIS STORY!!!

another awsome chapter aww poor Yami at least hes safw anw and he has Bakura and Marik by his side Malik really did a number on hiim but Yami got rid of him you capture the characters feelings very well im loving this i bet its hell for the rest to see him like this after all hes usually the strong one but this time hes the one being looked after well great job as usual ^_^ update soon im lookiing forward to the next chapter i'll be waitiing patiently

Great chapter. I too check everyday to see if you've updated (and given us back Going On yet!) --- can I offer one tiny bit of constructive criticism tho? It seems to me that Yami is passed out a lot of the time. Now, I know he's going through hell and that's what happens, your mind shuts down, but I wonder if you couldn't keep him concious for a whole chapter coming up soon? I know you're the (mega-amazing) author and all, but sometimes the constant "Yeah, awesome" reviews need to be broken up with opinions, ne? (By the way, be looking for my first chapter to be posted soon -- it's dedicated to you DracOnyx!)

--LadyGrey

By Acid do you mean Acid Pro, the music maker? That stuff rocks.

This chaper was wonderful, heartrending but wonderful, just like the rest of the story. Thanks for taking time to email all of us whenever you update, I really appreciate it.

Looking forward to the next chapter!

-Helaine

Great chapter. Poor Yami. Recovery will belong but hoprfully he wil get through it. I hope that they bous will stick by his side. Waiting for the next chapter.

*blush* Thanks ^___^ I love your work too! Hmmm I saw you like final fantasy me to! But did you ever think Yami and Cloud act and even somewhat look alike?
I do, man I love to see those two go at it! ..>..> I'm such a prev, I am! I'll stay up at night looking for Yaoi porn, and reading porn! I'm working on your fic, I had to think of a plot. I think i'm finally running out of ideas. Btw my baby is doing fine, I'm getting a belly, and I find the sex out this month can't wait! Anywho I'm rambling here, update and keep writing! and I hope that prob with your power was solved.

Jenn