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Poor Yami.. sheesh... He's been through a lot, ne? *huggles Yami-plushie* I loved the chapter... very angsty... but very comforting too... I love the psychological aspect you've put into it... I've never really imagined Marik being a Psychologically informative person... but It works quite well. ^^

And as for the question... YES! A Ryou/Yami chapter *is thinking back to the earlier one* would be really neat! I loved the way you did that... So Yes. ^___^ A lemon between them would be coolie! *grins stupidly* ^___^

another great chapter aww poor Yami i really do feel for him hes had a crappy life hasn't he but at least hes not alone and at least its over and he can start living his life again that part where he was having flashbacks i loved that part it really got to me you do an excellent job i read that and i was like aww porr Yami i just wanted to give him a hug and tell him it is ok i am looking forward to the next chapter but i am a little sad that its going to end soon *sniff* but i suppose all things must come to an end sooner or later *sniff* well keep going update soon ^_^

Great chapter. Not a lot of time today -- my two cents, I'd rather not see just a Yami/Ryou lemon, I think the two of them love their significant others enough to be satisfied with that. But with your talents, I'm sure you cane upe up with a "tasteful" orgy scene. ^^;;

Yami/Ryou would be awesome. I read that one chapter, where Yami growls "This is what you can do to a man", and wished fervently that they would continue the little lesson... hef yof you're not abhorrent to the idea, make it a Yami/Ryou/Yugi threes ^_^ ^_^

This was very good sad but good please keep it up

this story is going so well af itf it fits then a yami/ryou scene would be kool love this story

Such a great chapter, mate. YESSS I wanna see a bit of Yami-Ryou Mwuhahaha, I have no shame!! Or Yugi-Ryou, I don't care, I love them all and you'll make it good no matter what it is, mate!! Cheers.

I REALLY LIKE THIS STORY AN I LOVE YAMI ABOUT THE Q. YES I REALLY, REALLY WANT YAMI N RYOU AND THAT YAMI IS GONNA SHOW WHO'S THE MAN, REAL MAN, PLEASE MAKE IT THE BEST HARDCORE EVER MADE. IM SUCH A HENTAI IT DOESNT BOTHER ME.
A LIKE THE SONG YOU PUT, CAN YOU TELL ME WHERE TO FIORE ORE I DO LIKE RAPTURE, EMAIL ANYTIME.

loving it, as always, yami/ryou please!! ... also, is yami going to grow healther ... back into that sexy beast that he was before?? i hope he gets sexy again!

Poor Yami-chan!!!!!!! I hope they can make it all better!!! I can't wait till the next chapter!!!!!!!