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by DracOnyx

person Rurouni_agra
schedule April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*is crying and cheering at the same time*
I LOVE YOU! *big waters chibi eyes*
That was BEAUTFUL! BRILLIANT!
I...I think I'm gonna stop there or else I might never.

Second to last chapter?
*smiles through tears*
I never thought it would end. I've loved every minute of it.
Go out with a bang, DracOnyx.
person LadyGrey
schedule April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aww... now see, I didn't expect /that/ kind of Yami/Ryou lemon... that was so sweet and in line with the story that I take back my earlier vote against Y/R. Beautiful chapter... and I second the motion DracOnyx: Go out with a bang. Thanks for a great story.

LadyGrey
person The Pop Tart Spirits
schedule April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I love you.

What do you mean, next to last chapter? Well, that means you must do a sequel. We fans will demand it!!!

Have you ever seen Outlaw Star? Well, if you have, imagine Aisha in your face saying that. If not... go see it. It's only 27 episodes and it rocks.

How many times have I said it? But I will say it again: I LOVE THIS F***ING STORY!!!! ^_^;
person Arainaina
schedule April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This was a good chapter please keep it up
person Meg
schedule April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
::wipes tears away from eyes:: That.....was beautiful. I'm so happy that Yami's okay now and what better way to do it than with a little help from Ryou and little Yugi! That was so great, please keep writing this, I know there's only a couple more chapters...are they ever going to go back to the club? Anyway, I loved it, you kick major ass, I'd just like you to know. I'm going to have a good cry over the sheer brilliance of this chapter. And that's not a bad thing. heh heh heh. I loved it, I don't know how many more times I'll say that, so bear with me as I compliment your brains out. teehee. Anyway. Talk to ya later, luv. Cheers. Meg
person yvy
schedule April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
sweet i love it , great fic
person terry
schedule April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was a great chapter (of course the Yami/Ryou/yugi lovin' is a plus). I'm glad that Yami is finally recovering properly! Can't wait to see how he copes with everyone else. Also, is Pegasus going to make an appearance again. Hope you update soon.
schedule April 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love it! I love it! I love it!!!!!!!! And, I can't wait till next chapter!!!!!!! This is to kewl!!!!!!
person Tegasus
schedule April 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! And YES!!! I want to see a Yami/Ryou! ^_^
person Rurouni_agra
schedule April 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another brilliant chapter.
Heart wrenching and teary eyed chapter, but brilliant nevertheless.
I'm not to sure about the Yami/Ryou.
I'd like to see it happen, but I think Yugi should be his first if you're planning penetration.
It just seems fair. But over all I would like one.