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by DracOnyx

person Arainaina
schedule February 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very good please keep it up oh and i have an oppinon are you gonna have a chapter where malik takes yugi just so he get's what he wants?? but if u don't that's fine to anyway very good kepp it up
person Arainaina
schedule February 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
very good please keep it up this story is very good
person Keishi
schedule February 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
-purrs- Well-written and hot. Nice chapter, I'm loving this storyline. The sexual tension is so thick, one could slice it and serve it as dessert!
person meg
schedule February 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
::grins:: this is the greatest story. you should keep writing more! I can't wait to see what happens...it's just too hot to see the three of them together like that!! Feel free to email me if ya need editing or something like that not that you do, I'm just saying, how's that then mate? Update soon!!
person courtney
schedule February 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Cool story I can't wait to see what happends. Is there going to be a three some near the end and what is Malik going to do when he finds out that Marik as a thiami.ami. The only thing I can think of is a bloody mess.
person Arainaina
schedule January 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was very good please keep it up i wish to read more.
person princessoflightanddarkness
schedule January 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW O_O
GREAT UPDATE HON
KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK
WOW THAT WAS WOW
HOT!!!!!! UPDATE SOON
person Dai-Nemesis
schedule January 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This fic rocks!! Update soon!! Oh and make a threesome with Yami ,Bakura and Malik!! Please?
schedule January 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Enter Bakura! Nice. Please continue.
person ACIDBURN
schedule January 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Love it! Update soon