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February 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Cool story im really enjoying this I love sto whe where Yami is either the main character or he plays a big part (especialy dark stories) what is Malik gonna do next im dying to find out keep it up you are a very talented writer you have to update asap ill be waiting
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February 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
uhm...... who is the dancer? Malik or his Yami? because in every other fanfiction, it's Malik for uhm... the 'good' one and Mafor for the 'bad one' ..... so I have to say, I'm a bit confused when you write about 'Marik' being the dancer.........
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February 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey! Teasing people with suggestive numbers! Shame! That was a great chapter! Bakura's an empath?! L
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February 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I would love to read more about Bakura's powers getting out of control, or at least reminabouabout how he got them under control. I like how you added that in there. Marik's 'sensitive', and Bakura and Yami have powers, now they can all hook up! Please update soon!
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February 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aw, man, this is so cool! I hope you update soon, b/c it's not nice to torture people with waiting! =^-^=
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February 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
LOL WOW Yami as a hang over in both our fics Poor guy hehheh Kick ass fic!
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February 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am liking this story lots. This was a good last read before bed. I like this family that yami is making for himself. The charaters are great. I like the moving scene, how eveyone helped. Are we giing to have the threesom and Yugi/Ryou in the story? Anyway keep up the good job.
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February 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
EEEEEEE its sooo cute! and funny ^-^ i love it! ~leaf~
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February 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Once again, this is great! This last chapter was in no way a disappointment, it was hysterical! I loved the ending of it too..about the leaking! haha lol. Anyways, the lessons are great too, and I've found that to be true about many things in life, even though my life is nowhere near as bad as Yami's is played out to be. i wish I was telepathic ans telekinetic...damn. hehe anyways, I can't wait for the next chapter, keep up the fabulous writing!
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February 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
More reviews, huh? Hn, speak for yourself! lol. We all want more reviews!
Aaannnyway, thanks for the bowl of sexual tension -hordes the UST- I'll cherish it always. Hon, you have just made my faves list with this chapter. I love that you wanted to write a threesome, but instead of just, well, 'writing the threesome,' you managed to put together an intriguing story that has yet to make my interest wane.
Oh, and from one learning wiccan to a practising one, Merry Meet!
Aaannnyway, thanks for the bowl of sexual tension -hordes the UST- I'll cherish it always. Hon, you have just made my faves list with this chapter. I love that you wanted to write a threesome, but instead of just, well, 'writing the threesome,' you managed to put together an intriguing story that has yet to make my interest wane.
Oh, and from one learning wiccan to a practising one, Merry Meet!