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by DracOnyx

schedule February 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
^-^ Nice chapter! Tear-droppy, though... poor, depressed Yami. -gathers him up and gives him giant hug- 'Sokay, love, I'm sure the authoress will join you with Malik (I call him Malik, but I also see why you call him Marik) and Bakura soon.

Your muses! So cute! One is golden, one is silvern... love the contrasthavehave only the one -Irvine peeks around corner, smiles tentatively- but he's worth it. LOL, maybe the three should play sometime?

Anyway, wonderful writing, nice chapter to come home from a stressful work day to! Keep it up! ^-^ Happy V-Day to you!
person YamiNShadowsGirl
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Once agaiotheother great chapter i love the plot and your ideas a great story i fsorrsorry for the trio of Marik ,Bakura and Yami cos they so badly want eachother I cant wait to see what Malik is gonna do next is he gonna try andt Yat Yami im surprised he isnt lusting after Yami too update soon i have to see what happens next
person Ryoanna
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Once again, very good chapter! You're lucky! I would have never have thought of this story the way you did! The way you put the characters individually into their own personality was just awsome!!!!
PLEEZE WRITE MORE!!!!
Ryoanna
Thankies!! ^_^
person Rurouni_agra
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THIS FIC! Please write more of it soon. You've got a great plot going and you developed your characters well.
person Tuulikki
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm almost glad that was the last chapter you've got up. *yawn* I _really_ have to go to bed now, it's past 1 am here. Anyways, great story. And poor Yami, of course... Sorry I'm too tired to leave an intelligent review now.....btw, d'you have an ff.net account? Have to go to check that.
person leaf zelindor
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
don't you juove ove it when your muses think they know best for ya? -lol- very good chap, i like the sweetness and stuff...-sugar.........>.>.......the only good thing about v-day...cheap chocolate! <.<....otherwise the day sucks...
~Leaf~
person Arainaina
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please write more it's very good, can't wait for more
person leaf zelindor
schedule February 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
awe!!!!!! -lol- i loved the chap! violence is good in certain amouts...and i look forward to more!!! ~Leaf~
person Arainaina
schedule February 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very good please write more
person Keishi
schedule February 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
^-^ You are quick with the chapters, aren't you?

First off, let me do this before actually reviewing the chapter. -melts into happy fangrrl puddle- Um, that description of Jou? Yeah... -smiles dreamily- I'm stuck on the blond, can ya tell?

Anyway, violent lil chapter this time around, but good nonetheless. I wish I could write as fast as you do! And, uh yeah -cough- I caught the room number pun aswell, lol... I thought I'd be the only one, heh. Anyway, interesting chapter, still can't wait to see where this all goes. 15 or 16 chapters, huh? I think I can hang in for the long ride. ^-^