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by DracOnyx

person ACIDFLOWER
schedule February 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AF:*Jaw drops*
Bakura: *Rolls Eyes* Shit Jenn got to see me and Yami action
Yami: *Folds arms* You seemed to like it.
Bakura: In your damn dreams
AF: 0_0 OMFG
Yami: Turns to Jenn, 'What the hell is wrong with you?"
Bakura" Shit head. Like I fucking said she got to see me and you fuck. She happens to love us as a pair.
Yami: Growls. I thought me and you stop this yaoi stuff?
Bakura: I guess not
AF: Shakes head. That was H O T !! WORD OF THE DAY HOT!

LOL I LOVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVV YOUR FICS oh
if you like to see Bakura and Yami try to stop Yaoi I found this site I thought it was cute

http://members.fortunecity.com/skylaandmel/SkylaDownloads/yaoi1.htm

BYE BYE
person Dai-Nemesis
schedule February 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You rock you rock you rock you rock!!! I'm getting addicted with this story! Update soon!!
schedule February 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay!! Yami finally gave in!!! *does a little dance* Can't wait for the next chapter.



~Rainy
person Arainaina
schedule February 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aw that was very good please write more soon
person andrea
schedule February 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
HOT DAMN THIS FIC ROCKS!!! PLEASE UP DATE SOON HUN CUZ I TOTALLY LOVE IT!!
person Keishi
schedule February 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Finally read through this chapter, and what a chapter it was! Oh, poor Ryou, is he going to recover from what Malik did to him? Wonderful chapter, as always, though I'd love to see Bakura in action with his powers, or is he just empathetic? Anyway, keep up the good work! Oh, one more thing: I couldn't help it, when I read the part about Yugi and Ryou kissing, I kept imagining them as chibis. They're so 'awww!' together!
person Arainaina
schedule February 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
No, malik hurt yugi and ryou * cries * anyway very good please keep it up i want to know more
person leaf zelindor
schedule February 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
don't be mean! -glomps and gives you patented chibi eyes- i love this fic! please update soon! ~Leaf~
person darkqueen
schedule February 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey this is really good! i like it! Please update soon! I can't wait.
person Ryoanna
schedule February 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter! I can't wait for the next one, so
PLEEZE WRITE MORE!!
Ryoanna :)
Thankies!!!!!!!!