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by DracOnyx

person Ryoanna
schedule February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey! Sorry! My email's not working any more so no more writing to anyone anymore for me!! *Sob* And I like sending emailto eto everyone! I LIKE to talk to people! But I can't *Sob* now.Sigh. Oh well.
The story? AWSOME!!! Very cool, I like the YY/B/M thing. It just sounds right. If you can (Unless u wanted that last chapter to be the end) PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!!
Thankies,
Ryoanna ^___^
person leaf zelindor
schedule February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
eeee awe, whooohoo! sex! -lol- i'm a dork ^_^ ~Leaf~
person YamiNShadowsGirl
schedule February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i like it im so glad Yami finally exepted it and returned to Marik and all his friends now they can be happy im still awaiting the return of Malik im dying to see whats gonna happen when he comes back and as for the lemon well what can i say it was hot i loved it great chapter again i enjoyed it alot im lookin forward to the next chapter keep up the great work this is really good update soon
person Keishi
schedule February 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Interesting two chapters, yay for Bakura finally breaking through to Yami! And (duh) of course the word is empathic, dammit I would get that wrong. -laughs- Please continue, and don't mind the yaoi fangrrl climbing into Bakura's lap every so often. He's just too cute to resist!
person YoukoKitsune
schedule February 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
god! this is a wonderful story please update soon I can't wait
person Kalee
schedule February 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hello me again and yes it was a loveldatedate. i was wondering if ur ever gonna let yami come home happy? will there always be problems? ne ways grate stories. Write on!
person Kschur32
schedule February 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am liking this story a lot. Way to hang in there Bakura! This is a great concept and you are doing a good job with the story.
person Yuriko
schedule February 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, no, I'm not disappointed. ^o^ As they say, If you don't have something nice to say don't say anything at all - in other words, better to have no Anzu at all then Anzu bashing. ;)

Another great chapter with yummy craploads of angst! I love angst. <3~~ Here's hoping for more angsty B/M/YY...

...Yuri-chan~~~
person YamiNShadowsGirl
schedule February 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
another great chapter awww i hope Bakura can make Yami see sense and i hope Yami goes back to everybody soon cos they miss him especialy Marik and Yugi i love thiis story keep goin update soon
person Ryoanna
schedule February 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, Sorry I didn't review the other chaps. I just wanted to say that you've got quite the talent for writing!
PLEEZE WRITE MORE!!!
Thankies,
Ryoanna ^_^