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Great Story!! Is there going to be any Ryou/Yugi sex in this? I hope so... Well anyways... keep it up!! UPDATE SOON!

damn i love this story its really good Yami better watch his back cool i love it im glad that Yami is happy hehehe that scene with Ryou was funny great chapter as always MaliMalik better not get too cocky after all Yami is not gonna be easy to get it will be interesting to see what Marik will do next and his plan for getting his Toys keep goin your a really great writer and il be waiting for your next update which hopefully will be very soon

Good chapter. I like the scene with Yami and the boys. Tickel fights are always a good thing, sooooo much fun. I can't wait for the next chapter.

ohhh.....that was awesome. I new Yami would understand Marik. ur the best, please keep writing. Im on edge to see what happens next

Aw that was so sweet keep up the great work please keep it up i wish to read more

WOW! Is all I gotta say.This fic os so amazing and addictive.e cre crack but not. So much smutty goodness. But you also pull of the plot thing too, I myself have issues with plot. *kicks plot out window* And I hear you with the watering it down for FF.net. I my self got to the point where I just stoped doing that and only posted on this site. Anyway hey if you get a chance please read some of my fiction, it would mean alot to me. Ahem, update soon! I can't wait for the next chapter.l thl then.

-Pinky-

Sweet scene.. for someone who hasn't really written yaoi before, you're doing a wonderful job, in my opinion. Just the thing for me to take my mind off this stupid cold and relax with something yummy. -raises up tea cup- To you, on a job well done!

O.O Oh my god that was great!Keep up the good work!

Yes brilliant! And they keep on coming don't they? ::no pun intended...that's lame I know lol:: This story is one of my favourites, you're a really great author. I loved the scene at Yami's cabin with the water and the floating...it had awesome imagry, I could picture everything perfectly, and then Yami fell. hahah it was so funny! I love how they're all ok with sharing Yami too, in the beginning I was wondering how you would work it, if you would cut one out or whatever, but I'm really glad you didn't, it made the story even better! I can't wait to see what you've got coming next. And that wasn't a pun either. haha I'm weird tonight. lol.
Meg

THAT WAS GREAT! I've been waiting the whole fic for that. Though I LOVED Bakura and Yami.
One question...why didn't Marik and Yami float like he and Bakura did? Just kinda wondering if there was some significance behind that.
I know I haven’t reviewed but I've been following Gravitation religiously...I think it's that good. Hell it's one of the best fics out there in my opinion. It's always the first thing I look for. And that says a lot cause I'm on here way more then is probably healthy.
I LOVE your writing style...I can just picture it...especially Yami on the bike and the three of them on thece fce floor early in the fic. *drool* I also liked the scene where Yami is floating about the lake. I'd like to see a fanart of THAT (or the dance floor ... that was the BEST PART, yo!). You know an authors good when their words paint a picture. (And the fact that this picture is three sexy guys always helps.)
Keep writing. I know you've got more to this story, and I want to see Malik dead. *pulls our assassin’s knife*
Do me a favor? Put a little Ryou/Yugi in this? I want to see what you can do.
Love ya lots! Ja.