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by DracOnyx

person Kalee
schedule March 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
im really sorry bout ur friends.....sounds like they got a shitty deal. But please dont stop writing because of it , ur to good to let them bring u down
person ACIDFLOWER
schedule March 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WHOOP. YOU"RE THE BEST! MORE SOON! Don't mind me I'm happy Spring is coming! YEAH!



person Kalee
schedule March 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wohhh..... that was spine tingling. its sad that malik has that kinda power over people. Is he gonna get to use it on any of the guys?
person Anon
schedule March 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aww they make such a great threesome!!!!
I love this story!!!
But Malik is horrible lol (kinda a given) but wot he did to that girl was just mean!!!
Anyways, update again soon!!!
Lotsa Luv
Debs xxx
person keisha
schedule March 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
GO YOU THIS IS THE BEST FIC IVE READ IN AWHILE!!
person Keishi
schedule March 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter! Loved the bit between Yami, Yugi, and Ryou, esp. the tickling fight! I could so see that. And Shivia left about as fast as she came, huh? -shivers-

Good job, please continue.
person Moon
schedule March 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This fic TOTALLY ROCKS!!! I can't wait for the next chappie. I hope they end up staying together and i hope other than the bad guy ie. Malik that no one dies please don't kill them off another thing I know life is just not all happy and good but hopefully in this fic everyone has some sembelence of happiness and lastly this is a reqwuest from me I have read some rather good stories with my fav charcters dying and dead i would really appricacte it if you put a small thing in the authors note warning if by there being a chance that you are going to kill off the lovabale chars. in your story (i'm weird ) anywayz update soon this is really a good fic

Ja ne
person Rurouni_agra
schedule February 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Haha! Another chapter well written. Keep it up.
I'd say more, but I'd just be repeating myself.
person Arainaina
schedule February 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aw very good please keep it up i love thiory ory very much and hope to see a new chapter soon
person Meg
schedule February 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Again, this is amazing. The newest chapters were wicked good, thanks for emailing me. I haven't had the time to really review, so I'm doing that now. I can't wait to see what Yami's like at work, I think it's so sexy that Yami is a bartender at a nightclub. Is there going to be a yugi/Ryou scene? I like hearing about them too, along with Yami, Bakura and Marik of course. hehe. Anyways, as always, you're brilliant and I can't wait for the next chapter!
Meg