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by DracOnyx

person YamiNShadowsGirl
schedule March 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
another great chapter i love this story yeah i know i say that everytime i review but its true i do i'll have to agree with him Yami makes a great teacher im glad he cauld help Bakura too hehe i love the way you have done Yami in this story hes hot (although hes hot anyway i love him in this) ^_^ i would also like to know whats going on with Malik i wonder when he will make another appearence and yes Yami he is after you too hehe I wonder if once he has Yami if he does get him that is if he will fuck hiim in front of Marik hmm hehe ^_^; sorry my evil mind is working again i just love Yami torture well great job update soon i cant wait till next chapter ^_^
person ~*~Sparyk~*~
schedule March 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit...your story rox my sox! I love Yu-Gi-Oh fics...because you can make all the guys gay! Keep up the awesome work!
person Terry
schedule March 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OOWWWW! What's a different word than hot? Screw the furnace, I know what's keeping me warm for the rest of the winter! I love the lastest chapter! Very silly and sexy. Ryou's turn of events was hilarious. Yugi's voyeur act was great. This is one of the best written scenes i've ever read. I hope you update soon, especially since you'll reveal more of Bakura's brounround :hugs Bakura plushie: PLEASE UPDATE SOON. 'Til then I'll be rereading this story and reading your other stories. Once again great fic!
person Tweety
schedule March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
HOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

man, that was so hot.............

I love your story, Yami like that...... tight leather..... oh yum..........

hehe hope you update soon, gotta get my shot of-- *shiver* oh this story is so hot...
person Yami no Ite
schedule March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*snickers madly* That was great, the end.

"You are simply lucky you are my cousin, you little shit . . . or you'd be in for it too."

Heee. Was fun. Can't wait for the next chapter.
person Tegasus
schedule March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Love it, love it, love it!!! ^_^
person Dranzer-chan
schedule March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Holy SHIT!!! Yes you better post the next chapter! *puts this in her recs list on her profile*
schedule March 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yahoo!! Ryou & Yami action! I love it! I can't wait till the next chapter!!!!!!!
person Meg
schedule March 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
HOLY MOTHER OF RA THAT WAS SO GOOD!!! That was bloody brilliant mate, I must say. I loved that chapter! AAHH!! I can't wait to see what else you've got, and I've no doubt in my mind that it'll be a killer just like this wicked chapter! Sex scene was absolutely amazing, you know I love the Yugi/Ryami/ami/anyone pairings! Oh! But that was justso good and very well written language wise, you've got real talent. You rock mate. Cheers.
Meg
person KJ
schedule March 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is an amazing story. I absolutely love it. I hope you update soon. Please have another lemon with Yami, Bakura, and Malik. I wanted to know if your going to put what Yami's two lover feel about Yami's incounter with the two little ones.

Update Update Update Update !!!!!