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by DracOnyx

schedule March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Kewl, so, you do no marik is the evil one in the anime and malik is the good one right, meh, I love the story and I can't wait for another chapter!!
person Arainaina
schedule March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This was very good keep it up
person Yu-Gi_oh_lover_08
schedule March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow Malik is getting into the mix again. I was wondering where he was. Well I wonder what our hero's will do next. Find out on next weeks eposode of Gravitation. Hehehe little joke. I do that. Well I love the story. Cant help it just do. Well I want you to sit your butt down and get the next chapter up. Nah just kidden you update it when you have a good idea. Well see you later. Bye. Tell me when the next chapie is up. Later Survivor is on!!b
person Kendra
schedule March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was evil. How could you cut it off there. It is a truly amazing story. Please update soon. I usually only read PWP but your story is to good to turn away. It has plenty of juicy lemons to. ;) I think Bakura is going to try and fight back, get jumped, sent to Malik, and Malik is going to rape him. Maybe I'm wrong though. Good job and good luck.
Update Update Update Update Update Update !!!!!!
person Pinky
schedule March 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
MMMMMM so tasty! hehehehehe I love this fic so much!! You must update soon, hey could you e-mail me whne you update that would mean alot to me. Thanks luv. Alos if you get a chance check out my fics I would mean a great deal to me. UPDATE SOON!! Till we meet agian.
Cheers,
-Pinky-
schedule March 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Akkay, I'm only up to -checks- chapter 14, but I -have- to review thus far because DAMN did you pick a good song for Marik's dance! Makes me want to go watch Lost Boys now, or at least hunt up the soundtrack (I know I have it _somewhere_).

Off to read more chappies! Woot!
schedule March 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHHH! You are evil! Evil I tell you! Chapter sixteen was, hands-down, one of the freaking hottest things I've ever read-- EVER! If I didn't have another chapter to read, I'd go stalk my spatula-weilding fiance and force him to do unspeakable things to me. I may still go do that, lol!

In short, breathtaking chapter, sweets. Thanks so much for the naked!Ryou!
schedule March 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
^-^ Sugoi! Beautiful chapters, chica. I liked the mix-n-match of the last chappie, too, it was cute to see Ryou and Bakura snuggling, along with Yugi and Marik. Poor Yami-- he has more people crushing on him than he knows what to do with! Do I smell an orgy in the (hopefully near)ure?ure?
person High Priest Seto
schedule March 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! the story just keeps getting better and better I've missed sooo much, its a good thing I'm up to date with your story again though ^_~. Even though I don't usually dig the Yami/Ryou stuff I really like what you did with it and with the others characters experimenting with on another. Besides I know someone who would also want a little piece of the Yami pie *ahem* Kaiba. Heh. Is Kaiba gonna be in any chapters to come by the way? Oh, and is Joey every gonna take on that offer from Yami? ^_^


meep!
person Kschur32
schedule March 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
As always a great chapter. So that is going to be one house full of loving. Great chapter, I love all of the boys in this so much, you have done a great job with them. Waiting for the next chapter.