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March 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You really are evil. I wanted to clear something up. Last time I rviewed I called you a lemon goddess. You could also be a lemon god. Anyway, your chapters are always exciting and never cease to amaze me. This is one of my favorite yaoi fics. Update soon.
Much Love,
Kendra
Much Love,
Kendra
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March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ai! you cannot do that to us... I'm scared of hights, and here you leave me hanging on a cliff....
I can't wait for the next chapter, I await it eagerly!
I can't wait for the next chapter, I await it eagerly!
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March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hiii. Down here... no, here! On the floor! -waves from her puddle- Thanks again for another yummy Jou description! I actually haven't finished reading chapter 18, but I had to thank you now, or I knew I'd forget. ^-^
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March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Beautifully written chapter, as usual. I really only have one thing to nitpick at: lube, or lack thereof. Please tell me Marik anticipated Yami's actions and prepared himself before the performance? Because otherwise, my only thoughts are: ouch!
Other than that, loved it, and I think I'll just sit back and watch as events unfold, rather than guessing where the fic is going. It's so much more fun that ^-^ ^-^
Other than that, loved it, and I think I'll just sit back and watch as events unfold, rather than guessing where the fic is going. It's so much more fun that ^-^ ^-^
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March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh no!! A cliffhanger!! You're very good about updating though, so I know we'll get another chapter soon...right?? lol. Anyway, I loved these last two chapters, they were so great! Yami's Sex Ed class on the door was so funny! mmm...Yaammmiii...ahem. Anyway, you kicked major ass on these, and I can't wait to find out if Bakura will be alright. I lvoe this story, and you for writing it! lol. Keep it up. Cheers.
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March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AHGGG!!!!!!!!!! I hate when you leave the story as a cliffhanger. I want to know what happens soooo badly!!! I just read all those chapters for the second time and I still love the story!! If you find the time (And please hurry) can you make another chapter??!! PLEASE???
Foxygirl gives you much thankies!!!! ^___________^
Foxygirl202
Foxygirl gives you much thankies!!!! ^___________^
Foxygirl202
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March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!!!!!! Great chapter!! If u can, can you make another one? I'd appreciate that!!
Thankies!!!! ^______________^
Ryoanna
Thankies!!!! ^______________^
Ryoanna
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March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AHHHH! Cliffhangers!? Grr... this fic is killing me! I love the recent update: the teaser in chapter 17, just cruel :) but well written. i hope you update pretty soon, i gotta know who caught Bakura!
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March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
another great chapter and things are starting to get more interesting ooh i cant wait to see whats going to happen next poor Bakura i was glad Yami was happier but looks like he wont be for much longer hehehe sorry my evil side again what they did to him was funny too the strip poker and the sign and that surprise his reaction was great hehe well keep going im dying to see the next part whats going to happen i cant wait update soon (im sure you wil) ^_^
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March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great dance scene. Great Lemon. Had to fan myself. Please don't hurt Bakura? I want the 3 guys to be happy. BUt then you do what the story is telling you to do. Waiting for thxt cxt chapter.