rate_review Reviews

i love this story its great, my only problem is i can't read chapter 21 on my computer it comes up with the disclaimer then nothing... and it sounds like its a really good chapter *sigh* keep the stories coming we're all watching and waiting with baited breath!!

totally liking this fic dude but where's chapter 21? it skipped i think...

thanks to my, ahem, meddling hands i found out how you could get chapter 21. uh wanna how? hmm.. let me think first...

*spaces out for a moment*

i dunno i really want to build up the tension here...

*thinks again*

hmm besides i like making those avid fanfic readers of gravitaion squirm in frustration. as this evil (i meant that as a compliment) author does with this blazing hot fics.

*looks at the reviewer*

are you really that frustrated? do you really want to see chapter 21?

*thinks again...*

*evil grins*

ok, i don't like people stalling either and i've almost or maybe lost your patience in reading my review.

http://www.geocities.com/amunamenra/Grav21.htm

here it is my dearies. i am a 'patron' (using the authoress' words) as well as you are. you deserve it as much as i have.

are you ok with that *looking at the authoress* or were you expecting to lead them to your site well if that was your plan you may delete this review of mine right?

*bows humbly* loving your fics and hoping to be seeing the sequel of GRAVITATION. *fades from the shadows* till our paths cross again. or you may see me in vampirerave.com as "laineyue". *her voice echoing in the abyss*

damn you bitch!!! the only thing for chater 21 is THE DISCLAMER!!!!! UNLESS YOU GET THAT FIXED, I WILL TOURCHER YOU WITH A POOL NOODLE!!!!!

btw, you might want to proofread again for errors, i've seen a lot and it can get kinda confusing

I dunno what's wrong, but I can't seem to get chapter 21. If you could send it to me, or something, I would appreciate it. Because I love this story, and don't want to miss a word of it! PLEASE. ^_^

Wow!!!!!!!!!!! That was a really GOOD! I mean it was like fuckin' amazing!! You did a great job, and I can't wait to see your sequel. ^__^ Hurry Up. *hee hee*

Yes! Make a sequel!
I bet that you will make really good.
Keep up the work! ^-^

I really wish you could continue on with it

Great! I cant waitto see the sequel; maybe uplay/emphasize the Bakura/Malik relationship?? Also keeping an eye on your other stories!!

Wow, I almost don't know what to say. I started this fic this afternoon at Chapter one, ignored my children, ignored my husband, drank a few beers and kept my eyes on the monitor. Oh my god! I bow to your superior storytelling, this was absolutely amazing - I can't even put it into words. You're characterization was superb, everyone was so real, OMG, so colorful! The storyline flowed perfectly, all my questions answered fully as I read, nothing left out. You absolutely stole my heart and won my admiration as an incredible writer! Truly, I can only strive to be as good.

Now to the good stuff! You are queen of threesomes!! OMFG, all your lemons were absolutely perfect, sweet and tender and oh so hot! Having read this all in one sitting it became so apparent that every single lemon was unique and beautifully done ( I am so finding myself wallowing in repetition, my writing lacking). Absolutely amazing.

You have completely floored me with your brillance!

Su