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*edit* >< stupid computer! cut some of my review out!
OH MY GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!! This is the BEST fanfic I have EVER read. And let me tell you, I have read a LOT. I can't wait to read the 35th chapter. I think Pegasus (sp) is going to do some... wrong... "things" to Seto ><.I love that you named the deer Balwulf(sp), it was one of my fave storys. It was one of the ones I read in class. I didn't read a lot of the storys we where to read Oo;;;;. this is the BEST fanfic here in Adultfanfiction.net. I hope you keep up with this story for a LONG LONG LONG time. It's going to be a sad day when you end this story for good :: cries at the thought ::. Thank you SO much for writing the GREAT story.

:: rips out hair :: OH FORGET IT!!!! I'm just going to eamil it to you. >< I hate my computer!!!!!

Hehe, I found this fic during the summer and couldn't stop reading it. I really love how you've put the story line together, it's very creative. Anyway, Yami Marik is my favourite character aswell, and MalikxMarik yaoi is the best! Buahahaha! BakuraxRyou is my second favourite couple, so keep the lemons coming! At first I was upset to hear that the story was coming to a close soon, but was then very happy to hear you were making a sequal! Well, keep up the great work! Later.

Ah, I just remembered something I forgot to include in my first review...>.<;; I just had a suggestion for lemon scenes..>_>...<_<...you always have the same people fuckingir pir partners, for example: Marik always bangs Malik. Not that that's bad or anything, but just to have a slight change of pace, you could maybe have Malik fuck Marik, or atleast have them discuss it. XD You don't have to go with this idea, but I just thought it would make things even more interesting, or humorous. Anyway, I'm done blabbing, update soon!

Ack! I don't know why my second review was only one line....unless for some reason it only looks messed up to me, but I think something screwy happened. @_@ So just ignore the second one....bleh, it cut off my idea...-.-;; (If this one messes up too, I'll just send an email. And if possible, just delete the one-lined, fucky review.) Anyway, I was just making a suggestion for your lemons. You always have the same people fuck their partners, example: Marik always bangs Malik. There's nothing wrong with that, but for a change of pace you could make Malik penetrate Marik, or atleast have them discuss it. XD If you don't like the idea, ok, but I just thought it would be amusing. Anyway, I'm finished, update soon!

Great new chapter! I especially liked the part where Bakura made Marik angry, that was so funny! I'm looking forward to the next chapter! This story is simply awesome! ^____^

Love this story man i know what its like for Bakura to grow up with brothers the pick on ya BIG TIME i never had brothers but i do have 4 older half sisters and one younger sister and sadly i was the one in Bakuras shoes insteed of my younger sister being picked on be me the others i was picked on by HER and my older sisters si know full well what hell is growing up like Bakura so it just goes to show that being the youngest doesn't mean it will be them picked on it could very well be them picking on the 2 nd youngest meaning me i guess it was because i was always the quite one so to them i was a much better target them my younger sister oh well life sucks then ya die when can i say i learned to live with it and just like Bakura i turned out MADDER THEN HELL well any way GREAT story loved it and always will can't wait till the next chappie Ciao then Je ne ^_~

EVIL! Cliff hangers and I don't get along, poo! Poor Bakura, I still love him though! I can't believe it's almost comming to an end! But I'm glad you're writing the sequal already, can't wait! ;p Please updat ASAP, I must know what Pegasus is planning!

Awww... Ba waa was so cute and naive!!! As eldest child, I can relate to Yami and Marik when it comes to torturing the youngest child. It makes for great memories! LoL! Yay! The pineapples are next! I really really love your bonus stories, they just add so much more humour to the main storyline plus they add so much more detail to the characters' personalities! As for the story itself: Poor Seto!!! And Jou! (Bakura used to wear his food! Hee hee!)

*tries to say 'aww' and not laugh. then fails* Ooh man they were cruel!! But Bakura as a cute little chibi? aaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwww that is so kawaii!!!!!!!! *giggles* but as for ole one-eye-peg *blows a big raspberry at him* I hope someone rips ya other eye out!!