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for The Viking Brothers

by ChibiMisu

person Deb
schedule October 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Lmfao!!! That pineapple story is priceless!!! My god its so funny!!! Hehehe!!!
Will there be any more bonus ss?
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Poor Yami!! Whats happened to him???? Please don't let him be dead....waaaa!!!
Bakura/Ryou scene was hot as usual hehehe! Love it!
LOL when Yugi was in the cupboard!!! Hahaha! That was so funny!!!
God i cant wait to see whats going to happen next!!!
Please update again soonie
Mu
Much Luv
Debs xxx
person serebii_faerie
schedule September 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
XD I've been reading your story for quite some time now, but aff.net is rather slow, so I've only been able to have the patience for reading about 3 chapters a day. I'veI've finally caught up! I just love your story! Especially since this has Malik, Ryou, and Yugi. There aren't many stories that have those three in them AND have them in character. And I love their yamis too. I have fallen in love with your short stories. I'm still laughing about Smokey the Cat, Tickles the Mouse, and I can't wait to see how Bakura Loves Pinapples turns out. XD Please continue soon! Ja ne!
person Arainaina
schedule September 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very good, go Yugi he's really taking his role seriously. Anyways very good I really liked please continue soon
person Red Dragon Of Egypt
schedule September 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
RD:OMFG LMAO that was the funniest little bonus story ive ever heard HAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHHA*rolls on the ground her side in stitches*hehe ALL HAIL QUEEN BAKURA BAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHA oh and one other thing *wipes tears from her eyes and then glombs Author* THANK YOU you save seto thank u thank u thank u hehe i know jou would be very upset to lose his lover so this makes me very happy well gtg now TTFN TA TA FOR NOW AND UPDATE SOON PLS ^______^
person Pwetty Blood
schedule September 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay! We finally got to see Duke in action! He's a damn good thief and reminds me of a character from that video game... Fire Emblem. Anyway, the girl that they met up with was really really annoying. She was annoying from the moment that she said her name was Bunny Rabbit... 0_o Poor Seto!!! I'm sure that Jou will be more than happy to nurse him back to health though...

Again, great mini-story!! I loved Bakura's thoughts about Marik and Yami looking as if they tasted good and the pact that he had made with Yami about eating Marik first. The best part has got to be when they were all in the net! As for Bakura being queen... Well, he does look like a girl and its better than being eaten... LoL
person Debs
schedule September 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
LMAO!! The pineapple story was GREAT!!!
Hail Queen Kura hehehehe!
Chapter was excellent as usual huni!
I hope Seto will be ok and that Jou, Duke and Tristan will be able to save him!
The thought of Yugi running the castle makes me chuckle hehe i wonder if he'll be able to do it...
Please update again soonies!!
Much Luv
Debs xxx
person Anne
schedule September 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi great chappie. You didn't take that long to update, I know some who stop right in the middle and NEVER update! I really wanna see what happens between Bakura and Ryou!
person letainajup
schedule September 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
My favorite part of this chapter would have to be the Pinapple story! I LOL everytime I hear those three guys fight with one another (especially Bakura and Malik)! Eat him! No eat him! I love that! You're dreams may be crazy but they make good ideas for stories! Please updat ASAP! Great job as always!
person dissention
schedule September 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hahahaha you crack me up! I love the pineapple story, and bunny rabbit, oh dont get me started! ^^
person Nymphadora_Tonks
schedule September 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!! This is the BEST fa I h I have EVER read. And let me tell you, I have read a LOT. I can't wait to read the 35th chapter. I think Pegasus (sp) is going to do some... wrong... "things" to Seto ><. With the way he winked at in when Keith asked for Dukes hand, and the way he was asking when he asked Seto to join him. I want to see a threesome with Marik, Malik and Ryou. He he he... Oo;;;. Oh and Bakura happens he find them and go crazy. Oh that would ood!ood! One on the things I like about this fanfics so much, it that you also put real turms in here. Not only are we all reading the best story out here on adultfanfiction.net, but where getting smarter. And I love that you named the deer Balfulf (sp), that was a good story. One of the few I read in my class. >< and let me tell you I didn't read a lot of the storys we where to read. I hope you keep up with this story for a LONG LONG LONG time. It's going to be a sad day when you end this story for good :: cries at the thought ::. Thank you SO much for writing the GREAT story.