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for The Viking Brothers

by ChibiMisu

person War-chan
schedule November 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE HURRY AND MAKE A CHTP.38!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
THIS IS THE 'BEST!' YGO STORY I HAVE 'EVER!' READ!!!!!!
DON'T KEEP ME WAITING!!!!!!!!!!!!! (small vioce "I hate cliffys" *BIG tearful chibi eyes*)

Ja ne
REALLYBIGFan
Miss War-chan (vikings are my type of people, FIGHT!!!) ^_^
person yyy
schedule November 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
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person sonfson
schedule November 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
O.o very well written, very f*cked up. Makes me proud to sit at the same lunch table with you. Rock On!
person The SEME
schedule November 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hello once again! I just finished Chapter Two (Don't worry, I won't post a comment on every single chapter....that is, unless you want me too ^_~)

I really enjoy the story so far and you're writing has improved since the Kain and Artemis days (Sadly, mine hasn't T.T) but one thing about your writing, you mix present and past tense a lot. You should just stick with one or the other. Usually, stories sound better in past tense (words with "ed" endings like "walkED" or "dancED", etc) I see how you sometimes mix the two tenses around and its a wee bit confusing.

Anyway, keep up the good work!! I have at least 30 more chapters to go before I'm up to par with everyone else! >< Haha!
person Court Aka SEME
schedule November 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey beautiful! I finally figured out how to post! Well, I just finished the first chapter of the Viking Brothers! (T.T I know, I'm so far behind) but I really enjoy it! No wonder you've become synonomous with awesome Yu-Gi-Oh fanfiction on AFF.net. ^__^ Keep up the good work!! *hugs*
person Tenshi of Time
schedule October 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi,
I love love love love love this story! I'ts soooooooooooooooo original and wonderful and fantastic and Ican'tthinkofanyothercoolwordsful. I bow down and surrender to you the mighty wealder(spell write?) of the supreme original story writer orb and septer thing! *I am actually bowing no jokes*
You have to sooooooooo update soon otherwise i may just go completely mad (to late already caught that bus never mind) please please please please please please update soon and put me out of my msery *image of life saving story support surrounding a short ToT* .
Anyway thank you for giving me so much enjoyment from reading your story I hope it continues as ell (shamless hint soz!)

Luv your humbubble servant
Tenshi of Time
-x-


P.S
When you have finished this story (not for a long time I hope!)
Do you think you could find it in your heart to write a
Yami/ Yugi/Seto story (which would i know completely screw up what you've got going at the moment but i am unfortunately difficult) as there are so little decent ones aroud and i think you wold do them justice.
Thank you for your time (sorry for the length)
Luv
Tenshi of Time
-x-
person Tears Of Blood
schedule October 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Mother...Fucking...God...

It took me some time to read this, but damn it! It was definetly worth it!

I just can't find the right words in which i culd tell you how much I like it!

Your story line is perfect... feelings are also perfictly described! And the side storys! OMFG!!! They are SO hilarious!

PLEASE POST MORE SOON! I can't wait to read more!



*~"A friend is someone that will bail you out of jail, a true friend is the one sitting next to you in the cell saying "Let's do that again!"~*

person letainajup
schedule October 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I notice when I reviewed last time, I couldn't fibd it afterwards :( oh well! I liked your Pinapple story, I LOL so much, especially when Bakura was gonna get married to the leader ot when Marik wizzled on their sacred statue! That was classic, I love those three together-they are so funny! Great job!

I'm glad to see Yami is okay, poor Yugi was going crazy without him! So what is going to happen!? Is pegasus going to attack? Oh this boogles the mind, my soap opera fan fic! Please update ASAP, I love your work!
person Sora*lover1
schedule October 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG OMG OMG! THAT WAS FRIGIN AWESOME! BUT I WANNA SEE SOME YUGI AND YAMI ACTION MAN!
person jessica
schedule October 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
the fictions about the viking for yugioh were nice. interesting story line, has thier own climax and the romance was quite exciting, not the usual romance which we could predict. however, i ll much prefer if duke and keith together. i know it sound crazy but i love to see a bad guy like keith turn a new leaf to be a good guy and deserve a good ending. i could sense he has his sensitive side. but, overall is a good fanfiction. excellent!