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for The Viking Brothers

by ChibiMisu

person rootbeer
schedule December 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
umm, Ilove this story, so don't get me wrong but... Yugi, Ryou, Malik, Duke, Jou... they are just TOO pansy. They get treated like women a bit too much.
person Red Dragon Of Egypt
schedule December 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
RD: hahha omg that was too rich hehe GO YAMI GO YUGI ya show that pegasas jerk who the REAL KING OF GAMES/BATTLES REALLY IS hahaha this is soo great this is the best chapter ive read next to the marriage and "yami's way to say thank you to yugi"hehe keep up the great work i eagerly wait to see what happens next hehe well gtg now JA NE ^___^
person letainajup
schedule December 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WHAAAA! Poor Ryou, I hope he can get some true loven from Bakura (but Bakura being a jerk is mucho sexy)! Wow, one more chapter to go, I wonder what the sequal will be like? More enemies or more fights? Are the boys going to be in trouble again? I can't wait for your next chapter, get those finals done with (I just finished mine)!
person Camille
schedule December 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The baby is throwing rocks? HAHAHAHAHAHAH!!! You have to do something nice for Ryo before he goes insane! I was almost wishing he would have stabbed Jou with the pin! Heh. You had better write another part soon! I look everyday on this site for your story exclusively. Okay...so I have no life! ;)
person MultifacetedTune
schedule December 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
O.O ...............AAHHHHHHHHH!!!!!! How could you do that to me?!?! *tears out clumps of hair* ...and here I was all happy that you had updated, too..... -.- Hmph. I will only forgive you if you update ASAP, kk?...oh, and if you have a bit more Ryou/Bakura action, that would help, too..... ^__~ Keep up the good work!!! Ja ne!!!
person Seme
schedule December 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hello queer! *snort* I decided to comment randomly (I'm on chapter 7! Go me!) to tell you that I LOVE THIS STORY! Why haven't you started drawing scenes from it! That would be so awesome! Courtney wants to see pictures! Courtney wants to see pictures!
Ew, but Bakura was all kissin Ryou when he was SICK! I can hardly touch doorknobs, I would NEVER kiss someone if they had a fevor. Poor Ryou, hope he doesn't get sick!
Well, I'm off to read some more! ^__^

G&G
-Courtney Marie
person Malik the Psycho
schedule December 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
O_O!!! DAMN YOU!!!!! HURRY AND UPDATE!!! X_X
person Arainaina
schedule November 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh very good please keep up the great work glade you updated please keep it up i wish to see if yami will be ok
person Russian Doll
schedule November 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I would very much appreciate if you put up the next chapter soon... I read all of this in the space of two days and I have very limited computer time, which is a bitch, lol so I really would like you to continue ne? *hugs* arigatou
person Shuichi-chan
schedule November 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
GREAt chapter I absolutely loved it. This was my first time ever reading ur story I mean it took me several hours to read all of it but I did. The couples are adorable as always But Ryou and Bakura relationships saddens me so make them get together SOON! Ryou doesn't desearve all the angst you put him through!

Ok I'm done with my rambling just update as soon as you can.