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That was cute! You have to have Bakura treat Ryou better. ;) At least lie...

I enjoyed this fic alot! I'm sorry I didn't review earlier. O.o in this chapter, either I missed it when reading or did you forget to mention if Bakura could here Yami and Yugi's moans and taking the hint that Yugi took the potion instead leaving poor Bakura alone and wandering where is his love potion. I know that Bakura must be pisted that Yami forgot about him. *laughs*
Your long lemon fic of YamiXYugi is fine I think. Because, you didn't have them doing anything for few chapters. So this makes more of the MAIN Lemon scene. Excellent work on that concept.
*Laughs* very cute ending of Marik and Malik. I love it!
Please update soon.

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Hm, no wonder my mom named me Marika fromMarik because of the strong, but yet crazy things me,a girl, would do. PLease add anothe chap,puuuuulllllleeeeeeeesssssseeeee?

I LOVE this story so far!...you created the charecters perfectly!! i love the relationship between Marik and Malik...its so freakin funny!!! i cant wait till next chapter!!

You have to write more! This is a good story. I hope Bakura treats Ryou right.

Your chapters are not long! You shouldn't apologize for that! I love long chapters~~More to read *smile*
Please update soon~~~Wanna read that YamixYugi lemon~~~XD

That was an excellent chapter, and one hell of a lemon!
Please, I need the next chapter! The story is so good, and Yami/Yugi lemon...
Mmmm....Good! Well, great job!
LATER...

Hello. I absolutely love reading this fic. I love BakuraXRyou. I think their just so cute and the are such total opposites more than Yami and Yugi (my second fav)IMO. Yami is hot and Yugi just radiates cuteness plus they both like to play games. In Bakura and Ryou's case, they make me think of Koryu the devil and Kohaku the angel from Wish. Eventhough Kohaku is with Shuichiro. I really do think that Koryu likes Kohaku and that's why he torments the angel. This is how I see Bakura and Ryou. ^^v Anyway, I could actually picture Bakura acting the way he was while Ryou took care of him. Acting like a child. That's too cute. I also love how sweet Bakura was to Ryou while in his ill state. Yummy.

awwwww that chapter was so sweet hon
keep up the great work
please update soon this story is GREAT
^_^ I can't wait for the Yugi and Yami Lemon
IT'S ABOUT TIAHAHAHAHA

UPDATE SOON PLEASE, PLEASE PLEASE!!!!! this is a GREAT story. We want more action between Yami and Yugi. A lovely lemos would be perfect. Write more about those two. you just write a little about them compared to the other couples. You are a great author!!! Yami Rules!!!