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Oh no what's gonna happen neleaslease when you have time please update

Oooooo! This story is getting exciting, poor Malik...kind of. But I love where this is going, can't wait till your mid terms are over so you can write more chapters! Good luck!

That was damned reckless of Malik, how could he do that?! What's past is past and there isn't anything he can do about it! How does making Marik jealous solve anything?! How can he still be showing insecurities about Marik's feelings for him after all they've been through? Enough of my ranting though... Good luck with those mid-terms and please update soon! Need to find out what happens!

i love your story, but ch. 13 was a little cheesy, sorry. but keep on writing, i have to know how this ends

That was very interesting and excitinut put poor my Seto, he's all wet! Well, great chapter, keep up the great work!
LATER...

RD:for the second time Chibimisu your stating the obvious for me though i get the joke i understand what your talking about like the whole had the bow cocked and ready i know it means that the string of the bow is stretched and ready to fire the arrow some as those crossbows were theys stretch the bow to cock it or make it rdy to fire and as for the nsyns bit iknow it meant that they all nodded their heads at the same time well keep up the great work on a lighter note and i hope you update soon ill be waiting and if u dont update ill give you a triple dose of puppy dog eyes you hear me well get going gtg now TTFN TA AT FOR NOW

What a nice chapter!!! a litttle fun to make the story the perfect one!!! yeah!!! I hope you update soon. See ya soon!!!!

That was good please keep it up i so want to read more soon

Just geat, up date soon please, with a large and full of adventures chapter(s)

Awww....I hate cliffies! Please hurry up and cont!!! PLEASSSE! I love this story soooooo much!