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Very good poor malik marik hurt him bad marik anyway hope to read more soon

Oh! Poor Malik, I really felt the beating on that one, poor thing ;p Man did I miss reading the story, glad to see your back and writing! Now i'm really anxious about the next chapter, hope Duke wakes up!

Awe, poor Malik, hope it works out for him.
-Anyways- a good chapter, things are heating up, and it seems they'll only get hotter!
Well, hope to hear from you soon.
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I love this story it rocks. Keep updating it rocks

Unlike the previous reader, I'm actually reading this FOR the Duke parts, so I really do hope you don't decide to cut him out! Ah oh, is Dukey-boy in a bit of trouble now! After all, I'm sure Keith and co will find out about Duke's accident, and not only that, but the fact it happened because Duke was in a rush to warn Yami about someone's 'plan' - Keith and Pegs are sure to catch on that Duke has figured out what they are up to. And because Duke is just so very pretty, and because he HAS been such a pain in the arse for Keith, I'm sure that Keith will think up some horrible way of making Duke pay and keep him quiet, other than the far too easy path of death. I must admit that I'm really looking forward to the possible upcoming Duke angst - you really write him well.

Oh woot, you updated. I'm glad. Suspense in chapter fifteen, makes you want to read more. Your story looks very good.!.!.

That was a good chapter. Stupid Malik, he should know better. -Anyways- It was good. And I understand about midterms, though I'm sure you'll do fine. Good luck!
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Please continue, poor Malik he will get some

HOW COULD YOU GIVE YAMI A SON!!!!!! AND WITH TEA MOST OF ALL!!!!!!!! You should be punished, but no harm wille toe to you because you have to give us more chapters. I hope everything ends just fine and happy. I also hope you find a way to write soon 'cause i can't wait for the next chapter. Update as soon as posible ok? ^_^

OMG i love this fic I hope u update soon and good luck on your midterms I hope u pass with flying colors so that u will be in the mood to update a lot quicker nothing like finishing midterms with high spirits to be put in the mood to write and update *hehe*

update soon

Ja ne