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for The Viking Brothers

by ChibiMisu

person happy yaoi lover
schedule March 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
just thought id point out that in the begining yugi,malik,and ryou were talking about having an rabitt.and yet yugi just said hed never seen one.....sooooo your storys a bit screwed up...other then that its A.O.K lol update pls!
person Sakuri
schedule March 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
n.n I've been following this story for quite some time now; and it's really good!! I say that Tristin and Duke should get together...and I must admitt. ^^; Bakura and Ryou is the BEST couple in the world.

Thanks for writing such and awesome story! <3 keep up the good work!!!

-Sakuri Reioh
person Catty
schedule March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Man that was a evil cliffey![throws a pillow at you] Write more and youore not the only one with a testtostudy for!
person Lauren and Yami Lauren
schedule March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey!
I wust ust reading over your story again and I thought I'd review...again! I checked my reviews for First Anniversary and guess what? You've got 100 more reviews than I do!!! Grrr! Oh well, I was glad to see you've reviewed my story too...it's good to have authors support each other. Hopefully that RyouXBakura bit will continue soon.......*ser*.er*. I like how you make Bakura kind of sadisticly 'in charge' in this one...yet he still kind of contemplates that he MIGHT love Ryou?? Know what I mean? It's good, yesh. Anyway...update soon!
person Pwetty Blood
schedule March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh no! Poor Duke! The plot is really thickening now... I'm so happy for Yami and Yugi!!! It's so sweet!!! And Bakura's... um... slightly better with Ryou...
person Velvetina
schedule March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
please write more soon. I think you should put Duke and Tristan together but have Duke the dominant one and Tristan a little unsure! I want Malik happy again *sob* and Ba rea really need to smarten up how he feels about Ryou but i guess you'll have that coming soon! anyway please get out the next chappie
person ~Ivy~
schedule March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just found this story a few hours ago, and have enjoyed it so far, you've brought both humor and violence together in a way that it really works. Rarely will I read such a long story, but, if the fact that I haven't moved and just now realized I was up to chapter 11 already tell you anything at all, your really good at this please write more. So like I said I have yet to finish what you've written so far. I had to stop, the line in chapter 11 "You still look like a you fout out of the ugly tree and hit every stick on the way down!” I laughed so hard, I almost cried.



Hey you mentioned in your bio that you liked Kenshin, I LOVE the red-headed Bishie.
Also, obviously I love Yu-gi-oh as well, Ryou & Jou too!!!!
Ok I'm off to continue reading chapter 11.

~Ivy~
person Paulina
schedule March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great, I like it!!
person DreamingChild
schedule March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
'tis a very cool fic! I love all of the educational tidbits you give! So, like, were there no rabbits in america before, either? Well, please update yer uber-cool story! ^__^
person Arainaina
schedule March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It was very good please write more soon