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GAH! You must update quickly! QUICKLY I TELL YOU!

I honestly don’t know how this pointless dribble is doing so well. It only shows me that half the readers on this site aren’t of age, because no adult can honestly say they enjoy this. You need help with grammar, but what really irks me is your characterization, It's absolutely horrifying.

somone save Duke!!!!
if that evil keith touches him....... i hope tristan kicks his ass!
great chapter! and long too! go you~

This chapter was very good please keep it up but one question please don't have duke marry keith duke belongs to tristan not keith, but anyways very good

grr mean people. I'd hate to have family like those three. I loved the image of Ryou drunk and i can just picture the look on Bakuras face. next chap please :-)

I've noticed a pattern! Marik gets kicked in the groin an awful number of times... It's a wonder that it hasn't inhibited his sexual performance! Ryou being drunk is just plain funny, who'd have ever thought that he would turn into such a naughty boy? I feel sorry for what Duke is gonna have to go through soon... Evil Keith!!

You know, I was a bit worried when you decided that Duke would lose his memories, as it's often done in a very cliche manner. However, I really like the way you dealt with the whole issue, Duke remembers enough to make him still completely in character, and yet his missing memories add a certain twist to the story - very good story telling and use of character. I'm really loving *everything* you're doing with Duke's character, especially the way he didn't feel comfortable going very far with Tristan. That isn't a prude way of thinking, it's a way many people think when experiencing their first taste of sex, and I hope Duke doesn't rush completely into a relationship with Tristan. Of course, the story has become even more exciting with the inclusion of the twist of Duke possibly being forced to be paired with Keith, especially considering how much Keith hates him! When you look at the fact that Duke is already injured and how violent Keith can be (not to mention the fact that Duke is still a virgin), the potential angst for Duke is great, and I can't wait to see where you go with it, as you just write Duke angst so well. Bring on the fabulouslt writte Duke torture!

I liked that chapter, but why are you so mean to Duke? I know the guy is a jackass in the tv show, but he's not so bad in your fic, besides, he was going to tell Yami that there are problems an d that Keith and Pegasus are against him. Please update soon and give this story a happy ending.

THIS STORY KEEPS GETTING BETTER AND BETTER! I love the plot going, poor Duke-next to Ryou/Bakura he's also my favorite! So as far as lemons, will we see any Pegasus X anyone? Hmmm....guess that's a little better then imagining Keith to someone YUCK! LOL! Hope we see more of Malik and Marik getting back together, those two are cute! Can't wait for the next chapter to come!

firstly, i wanna say: GREAT FIC!!
hmmm... Bakura and MArik duel.... sounds great! lol, liked the bit where Yami walked in on his brothers and thought they were... well... you know...
put tristan and duke together; it may be a slightly cliched move but i'm pretty suou'ou'll write it so they don't look bad. plus they actually make a pretty good pair.

cheers. :)