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for The Viking Brothers

by ChibiMisu

person Zoe
schedule April 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Umm, I noticed a mistake. Yugi doesn't know what rabbits are? He was talking about eating Rabbit stew in chapter one.

Other than that though, this is really really good.
person Zoe
schedule April 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I was just reading through the reviews for this story, and I just want to say in response to Peter Pan's review that I am 27 years old and honestly enjoying this story!!!
person soultaker
schedule March 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! Please update soon!(:
person saku~ya
schedule March 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhh I liked this chapter. Poor poor Duke to be taken away when to marry when you obviously don't love them. I hope you put a yamixyugi lemon in the next chapter. I haven't seen them go at it for awhile XD I look forward to reading the next chpater ^.~
person OwaranaimonoAite
schedule March 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well the recs page I do know. When you click on the title to a story, you look in the address bar for the number at the end. Then you go to your user panel, click on reccomended readin and type in that number, then hit update, adn you're done! ^^ I loved this chapter, and I can't wait until the next chapter comes out!
person Letainajup
schedule March 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooohhh! Poor Duke, I feel so bad for him! But why am I so eager for the next chapter ;p I nearly LMAO when reading the Marik part when he first tried to eat Yugi and then when they told the stories of him and all the animals he killed! Funny stuff! Where do you come up with this? I also loved the BakuraXRuo scene-very juicy! Really can't wait for chapter 19! Please upate ASAP!
person Letainajup
schedule March 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooohhh! Poor Duke, I feel so bad for him! But why am I so eager for the next chapter ;p Irly rly LMAO when reading the Marik part when he first tried to eat Yugi and then when they told the stories of him and all the animals he killed! Funny stuff! Where do you come up with this? I also loved the BakuraXRyou scene-very juicy! Really can't wait for chapter 19! Please upate ASAP!
person Velvetina
schedule March 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
aww poor duke. Keiths mean mean mean and deserves to dies. Sorry i really don't like that guy. Fianlly Bakuras starting to question his feelings! Great work!
person Ravenx
schedule March 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I usually don't review unless I really really really like the story..and yours I just love!! I've been reading it for a couple weeks and find myselnderndering if you've updated yet so I can read what happens to everyone next. I really like the idea of this story. My fav couple has got to be Bakura and Ryou here. I just love Ryou being so submissive and Bakura so tough. Marik and Malik next? Yeah, I can't wait. Could there be a possible Seto and Jou sometime in the near future? Anyway keep up the great work!

Ja ne

PS: I had the same prob w/ RR. When you log in there should be on the left a under adding new stories, etc something that says RR. Just click there.
person Arainaina
schedule March 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aw poor duke I feel bad for him and tristan anyway very good please keep it up