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April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey! Don't put yourself down! That wasn't boring at all! I liked it a quite a lot, and I'm very pleased to find out that Bakura is warming up to Ryou...^_^;; But anyway, good luck on your other chapters...and if you can give a hint, I was just wondering: about how many more chapters will there be? I'd hate te the that this story is almost over! >.<
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April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter on a very great story
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April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aww isn't Bakura sweet, bet he doesn;t he know that he is lol. It wasn't a boring chappie at all i loved it! keep it up xx
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April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The chapter wasn't boring! Everything is beginning to tie together. Though, I must admit, it wasn't the unravelling of the plot that I loved, but the image of Bakura insulting and slapping Marik's horse. It's pure comic relief when Bakura and Marik are together. Ah, what is brotherly love but to fight and argue?
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April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
...im going to kill you. but it cat cause i want to see Otogi get rescued. he better be rescued.
on another topic. i love the story. its re tur turning out well
~cassandra
on another topic. i love the story. its re tur turning out well
~cassandra
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April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG I totally loved that chapter. I laughed my butt off when Bakura and Marik were talking about the horses. Hahah a horse whore that was great. And so was the lemon as always. I am happy that no body is going to die. I've been reading a lot which people are O_O I can't wait for the next one ^.~
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April 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*Begins twirling scythe and arms all muses and points out the author* Get Keith NOW! Or I'll grab him and feed him to Ammit! When will things get better?! I SO want Keith dead yesterday! And why is Yami the peacemaker? Cuz I recall him being sadistic in the manga, and in the anime before Yugi tamed him...
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April 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really love your stiry!!!!! I can't wait to see the battle chapter, i hope you make Yami and his brothers win this battle, or you can be in serious troubles. I also hope Yami can show Pegasus and Keith taht even wuthout his brothers or Seto, he can win and save his belongings. Go Yami!!!! By the way, nice Marik and Malik lemon!!! ^_^
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April 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Update!Update!Update!Update!Update!UpdUpdaUpdate!Update!Update!
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April 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really loved the make up sex between Marik and malik-very juicy! Great chapter, always loving what comes next! Poor Duke, I hope Tristen comes and saves him! Who's next on the lemon list? Yami and Yugi? Can't wait, update ASAP!