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June 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
EEEEEEE! AHahahahahahhA, Marik and Malik are so funny ^^ They are my faves in this, with Yami and Yugi too. ^_^ MOOORE! And i hope you feel better soon! And I hope this doesn't end anytime soon, this is so awesome! I absolutely ADORE it and I hang over each chapter... and I need to re-read it sometime when I get free time.... EHEHEHEEHEHE! I can't wait to see what happens ^^ -mutters about evil Bakura and poor Ryou- oh well ^^ -hangs over it again- MOOOORE :)
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May 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story! I laugh so much, it's amazing. You're writing is really good, and I love the pairings too...this story rox my sox!
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May 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very good please update soon also I hope yugi gets better soon
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May 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey seto's smart, i wouldn'tve thought of the animals that way. i tried to but my mind was tired. Poor Ryou, damn Bakura he's such an idiot!!! a confused one but still.............plz hurry with the next chappie! plz?..........i'll give you a cookie!!!
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May 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aww poor ryou, he never gets a break... but i still have to say I love your story soooo much! I hope you feel better soon ^^
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May 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*shakes head* I knew it! I knew this whole Ryo/Davin thing would blow up! I remember too well what happened with Malik and Keith! So pls have Yami and Marik get involved! I SO want to see Yami's reaction to the whole Bakura and Ryo mess! Cuz I know Bakura is a control freak, but Ryo's not the type of person that would just accept Bakura sleeping around! My friend went through that, in the end she dumped her ex and flatly refuses to take him back. In fact a few of our mutual friends started a rumor that she is married, so her ex would give up...My point is if Bakura's not careful he might lose Ryo for good! Meaning Bakura better starting changing his attiude soon, before i decide to send his sorry ass to the Shadow Realm!
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May 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ACK! My poor Ryou, but that was pretty stupid of him (especially knowing how possessive Bakura gets...and pyscho)! Ryou is turning into a little Malik! LOL! Well the animal mystery is solved, we get to see who is who! I must know what happens! What of poor Ryou and Bakura? Will Tristen eevr save Duke? Will Keith fight? And is Yugi really going to be alright (his hallucinations were too cute)! Update ASAP please!
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May 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter!!!
Loved the Bakura, Ryou and Davin interaction bit!! Hehe! It fun fun to see Kura jealous...not for Ryou though i guess....
Please update again soon huni! I cant wait to seat hat happens now!
Lotsa Luv Debs xxx
Loved the Bakura, Ryou and Davin interaction bit!! Hehe! It fun fun to see Kura jealous...not for Ryou though i guess....
Please update again soon huni! I cant wait to seat hat happens now!
Lotsa Luv Debs xxx
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May 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have read the whole story and i cant wait until i can read more. Viking brothers is the best story i have ever read on aff and i have read alot. please let it be that everyone lives by the end(meaning not any of the good guys) i think that something should happen to make bakura love ryou like yami loves yugi. Maybe if Seto give great advice to ryou hanghange Bakura. Please have a passinate lemon between them. Ryou should stand up to bakura like malik does to marik and he should some how get bakura chained to the bed ;+P. But how he does that is up to you. I love your story totally original and and has alot of different couples having lemon. All of my ideas are just suggestions i dont care if you dont use them because they probably suck. Thank you. P.S.-CHeck out the story i am cowriting called "Cup of Jou" on ff.net not as good as yours but some what funny. P.P.S.-please update soon
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May 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Usually, I hate soap operas, but in this fic, they're my favorite scenes! Bakura so does not deserve Ryou! Ryou practically stood up Bak Bakura when Davin and he were talking about him! Bakura should be grateful for someone as loyal as Ryou! He's so irritating sometimes!!! Fuck his stupid past, can't he get over it and love the damn boy who's stuck by him even when he was a total jerk!? Of all the couples, their problem seems to be the longest running of all... Whatever, I'm ranting, but could it really be helped when I felt a twinge of pleasure when Ryou turned the tables and cheated on Bakura instead? Malik's terribly funny when he's trying to fight Marik, especially when he can't harm a hair on his lover's head! If it wasn't for Marik's refusal to teach Malik, I would totally think that Malik has Marik whipped. ^_^ (Marik took him shopping! Shopping! I can't imagine Marik shopping!) Then again, I think the most hilarious part had to be Yugi's hallucinations...