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Awesome chapter! I really do like the way you write, it rocks. I'm still learning -.-' oh well. -munches on chippies- Will Yami and Yugi get to have some fun soon? They are. And I wanna read about Marik fighting Keith and whooping his arse in! Or Bakura vs. Keith... something! It'd be very interesting! And is Ryou still going to get a horse from Bakura? Cause if he is, he needs a name! Call him/her Jaimie! Heh, kidding. Jaimie was the name of my fave horse. He died a week before my birthday last year -.-' oh well. Anyway, MOOOOORE and I hope this doesn't end soon! -run!--wall!--smack!- ow... :D

OMG! I nearly fainted when I thought Ryo was going to die! Such a great story this is, I LOVE IT! I hope Bakura will now open up to Ryou more, I like how there relationship is still becoming one (seems more like them)! As for Duke and Tristen, I'm so glad they're finally back together. I wasn't sure if he was going to be saved or dragged back with Keith at the end, very good suspense! This couldn't be any better story, and not once did I think you were using Sleepy Hollow scenes! Please update ASAP! Thanks!

RD:hoy really tristen who taught w tow to fight let me show u how its done
*marches up to Keith then cocks her fist and rams its straight into keiths face then leaps up and kicks him in the neck then graps his neck by bothe legs gets on her hands and flips keith on his back with her legs*

thats how u fight and for and added bonus

*graps keiths hair rams his face into a three pulls out a wriseetheethed dagger and rams its hilt into his skull then pulls out her sillver coated iron whip and whips is around his neck the sends him flying into more trees then gives him several punches in the stomach and then slams him again in the chest with her feet till he is on the floor with enough injuries to place him in the hosptial for a a week*

and that is how u take out bastards tristan hoy anyways

*looks at author*

keep up the great work hope to read more soon and pls tell me keith dosnt agree with going against Yami again PLS it would be sooo much more wiser i mean really whats the point whats that bastard going to do with all that money and strong holds create a tea party the size of norway OH NO even beter creates his onw comic book goronzola cheese and wine clubs with a torture the heroes and anyone who is happy club on the sie yep bet thats EXACLTY what he want to do hmm dosnt seem much differnt then yami at least HE knows how to defend himself agains ENEMIES NOT HIS OWN DAM KIND hoy well again author keep up the great work TTFN TA TA FOR NOW *sees keith getting up after att attack and grab her Wurmslayer ans slices him in half*

Keith:X______X

RD:well u should stay down then when ur around me then u wont get hurt

YAY! Go Trisitain! I'm so glad he smacked Keith! And i almosted cried when Bakura said he'd have a go at not sleeping around with everone, oh please make him stop!!! on another note where did you get Davin from? Is he just a name that you came up with?
White Nymph

Ooooo you updated! I'm still staying in tune! Wow...look at that I'm actually reviewing...I'm so lazy so I rarely review! But you deserve a review so I'm reviewing! I'm looking forward to an update from you soon! Wow...is Bakura ever gonna change...so hard headed I tell you...heh...anyways, keep on writing!

Very good please keep up the great work

*eyes widen* This ficcy reminds me of a soap opera! Pls tell me u're gonna end this soon! *whistles* Nice background story on how Seto/Jou got together! *winces* I knew it! I couldn't see Ryo not taking Bakura's treatment laying down! So how willu cou cope with Kura being a human karma sutra? Since he was thinking all about how he wanted to try anything with Ryo! And so's Marik! Look at what he wanted Malik to do with him atop Avaldamon! *points to Marik accusingly*

aaah DRAMA and Tension and it was brilliant amazing i loved it UPDATE...please

Ooooo!! Great chapter!! Extra long as well!! Woo hoo!!!! ^_^
Cant wait to see what happens with bakura and ryou...i wonder if kura will last without no one else hehe
Also the duke/tristan thing! Keith is gonna be maddddd!!!!
Please update again soonies huni! I dont know how many times ive read this story now, but it sure is a lot lol!
Much Luv,
Debs xxx

oh please finish, you can't just leave me hanging here!!!!!!
what happens!!!!
the story is great!!