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for The Viking Brothers

by ChibiMisu

person aramis_chan
schedule January 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow ! I never was a Viking fan, but you sure made me change my mind. It took me about two entire days to read this, and once I had to stay up until six o’clock in the morning but it was worth it. Your story so wonderful ! I love it!!


I believe Yami is such an evil hypocrite... I mean “go, attack those ships” *disappears. Comes back when the fight is over* “hey, you killed them all, that wasn’t very nice.” Or “well, Duke, since you joined us after saving one of me brothers, my most important advisor and his lover, I can do with you whatever I want and my family happens to be more important to me than you.” *Duke is given to Keith. Duke is being raped.* “This is sad. Oh well, lets screw Yugi.” Arg! I _hate_ him! Or maybe I don’t (well, I like how you made him, and I often think the same way about him in the original...), but Yugi should slap him more often! Go Yugi! Don’t let Yami rule your life! Forbid _him_ to drink wine!!

I loved Malik and Marik too... It was so funny how Malik was acting toward his “master” from the very begin. I just wonder... Is he really that girlish?

Ah, and poor Ryou... Though _I_ am being hypocrite writing than, because I loved how you made his story...
He’s just so cute being treated bad be Bakura and all his friends trying to help him from time to time, but only when they’re not busy being perfectly happy and sometimes forgetting Ryou is the person they grew up with, not some random servant they befriended as bit (well, Malik and Yugi at least). It’s strange to imagine Bakura as the youngest and the weakest of three brothers, but you made it fit so perfectly, and it sure explains why he’s so terribly dominant and possessive (and a jerk ^^). I was afraid all the time that you would make him become nice too soon >: . I liked the last scene between them... I don’t know why, but I thought there is hope after all...

You’re also the very first person who made me think that _Keith_ is cute... It was so touching how he began to fall for his “bride”. And it was so funny how Pegasus was manipulating him (I’m a Pegasus fan, and I think there are so few fics where he is as cool as he should be...*g*)

Huh, yes, that’s it... I’d continue taking nonsense, but you started posting the sequel, and I didn’t red it yet.
person ~*~Sparky~*~
schedule December 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I've been reading this fanfiction for a while...it was a most excellent read. Thank you for giving me something to fill my nights with. *hugs* Great fic...hope you do another soon.
person lavender
schedule December 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
an extremely well done story.
person Shinigami24
schedule December 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*DEATH GLARE* What about Ryou?! He deserves happiness! If Bakura doesn't ease up on him soon, I'm siccing my muses on him! Have Ryou find his happiness! Why not have some guy kidnap Ryou from Bakura?
person Motje
schedule December 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay! You did it. I read it all! I love it. And now I can't wait for the sequel. And I love you for going to post it at mediaminer, now I can be notified when you updated :D
person becky
schedule December 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*wipes away tear* I love your story and I cant wait for the sequel to come out!!!!!!!! Will bakura and ryou get together?????
*hopefull look* they are so cute together!!!
merry christmas!
person Sai
schedule December 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WAAAAAA! What about Ryou and Bakura! I waited 41 chapters!
*DEATH GLARE*
person Kupo
schedule December 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe it's over. You have got to start the sequel soon! And when are bakura and Ryou gonna get married?
person Letainajup
schedule December 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*claps hands* Great story, I loved every second of it! I can't wait for the sequal to come, you did a wonderful job with the Yugioh characters (I can actually see the expressions and such on their faces)! Merry Christmas, and more Bakura and Ryou (I just LOVE those two)! Thanks again!
person yuki
schedule December 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
U should have made Ryou happy too....this is anoying.....I love Ryou and he ends up well.....you know it was nice anyway.

T_T I still want Ryou have a happy ending which he didn't!